If I - - -
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If I’m not an angel,
why would you call me angel?
If I’m not nice,
why would you love to be by my side?
If I’m not lovely,
how can I make you laugh and happy?
If I love rumors and lies,
how can I make you smiles?
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If you’re a bad one,
why does my heart tell you’re a good person?
If you are fake,
why would I still like to walk with you on the lake?
If you’re such a fool,
how could you make my world so beautiful?
If you've got dirty on your mind,
how could your works are so fine?
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If I judge from what I see,
that time you may leave me.
If I trust from what I hear,
that time you can disappear.
If I believe from what they say,
that time you don’t need to stay.
If I deem from what they show,
that time you can even go.
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But if I'm still be me,
the one you used to know.
I judge I trust from my heart,
not that from my ego.
I believe I deem I define,
I see I hear from my mind.
So why would you fade away?
could you please tell me why?
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If I give you my strength,
will you please be strong?
If I send you a melody,
will you sing me a song?
If I lend you a pen,
will you write me poetry?
If I share you my heart,
will you come back and get a new start?
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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
Dedicated to someone. ^_____^ When I said I trust you, I'll just trust you. And when I said I love you, I'll just love you. No matter what people say, I will never gonna change my mind. ^_____^
Thank you everyone for reading.
Comments (24)
... a very special dedication
Best wishes!
Thank you my loving twin, SCatlyn..lol May you have such a beautiful smile and heart forever and ever.... awwwwwwww
Come over here I would like to give you a BIG HUG now)))))
Any fellow who WOULDN'T want to walk round the lake with you must be quite mad...
It is Spring in the Northern hemisphere, isn't that the perfect season for new starts?
Enjoyed the read...
Bill
You Did it again !!
Loved this one for sure and I love you even more
"If you’re such a fool,
why would you make my world so beautiful? "
That part really touched me within' .. cuz we all had this person that looks so wrong while he makes everything RIGHT !!
Kisses & Hugs to you sister for this beautiful Write !!
Keep Goin !!
Swan
XXxxX-Cuse Me SIR!!! I am a LADY, and you are a GENTLEMAN right? A GENTLEMAN should not laugh at a lady soooooooooo crazy until rolling on a floor like that….. ------------ LOL
AND I don’t talk too much, the others are just mute.
(((ThanK You vERY MuCh))))
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Super!!!! Duper!!!
If you are not a good poetess,
How could you right such wonderful poems?
You deserve to be a poetess my dear cute Angel!
Keep on posting......I love to read your lines...
Always Be Happy....
GREAT POST,AND KEEP WRITING.
Niah
This is a most lovely and heartfelt write. The poet can say, If I lend you a pen, will you write me poetry? but must remember to keep one at hand with which to write, too!
Yeah I did it again! lol ( ermm.. what did I do? I think I did many things. lolol) heehee kidding
Believe me Swan, I love you more. : ) You are beautiful and you also make my world more beautiful. XXX
Thank you for being the same you and never change, and very thank you for your nice comment. I love you my lil sis!
Okay, Thank you very much for your comment, hunny may I ask how many girls have you dated ? 2? or 2? and the only (un)lucky one you have sang a song to ? Oh-----
ermm.... Mike, even if you are my lovely nice friend but don’t you ever feel comfortable with me then! I’m not ready to hear your sing.. LOL but guess what I love to sing too but out of tune most of time…. seems like I care? not at all…. lol
Baiibye Mr. Teddy & Rabbit… lol Cute!
>> If you are not a good poetess,
How could you right such wonderful poems?
Final Answer: I am an angel. ^__^
>> You deserve to be a poetess my dear cute Angel!
Hey u already knew I am an angel!! Good!!
>> Keep on posting......I love to read your lines...
What kind of my work would you like to read? lol I have loads, and 10000 lines…. But sometimes I am shy to post it here, you know it’s ermmm….. Illegal stuff…. lol :p
>> Always Be Happy....
Sure, I will. ^_^ and you too! Always Be Lovely & Happy!!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR LOVING COMMENT!
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I don’t know you will see this reply or not, but I would like to say THANK YOU VERY MUCH for being my friend, my bro, my uncle, my dad etc… I think I caused you a lot of trouble but you never complain or blame me. I wish you have a very happy life with your love and Velsi. ^_^
I missed all your beautiful poems Grandad…. I am so sad really. Still I want to say I LOVE YOU! who cares! I love you then I say I love you! This is from my heart, I don’t see anything wrong with that. But if you asked me what kind of ‘love’ I have for you, then I can tell I love you as you a very nice friend of mine I found online! Life is short, if I love someone, I will not hesitate to tell it. ^_^
Tell your girl, if she needs to know something, just ask me! Do not listen to someone else! Tell your girl to be strong and believe in the one she loves.
A heart is not a glass but it’s also fragile, get hurt and can be broken so easily by RUMORS and LIES.
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Yeahhh, Lots of questions.. lol Would you like to complete some?
Thank you for reading and dropping me a comment. : ) I really am appreciated that you come read my poem when there are loads of wonderful poems on this board. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
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Yeah I wrote this with so many thoughts but main thought was a really good thought that I dedicated to someone, I wanted him to be strong. : )
If I could give some of my strengths to someone or anyone who wanted it, I would!!!! Without a charge! ^__^ But I need to have some store in me too… lol So many crazy things in this world, once I get weak, the others are ready to attack me or stab my back anytime. lol
((Hey-- someone out there, I still want to wear two-piece okay!!)) ((Do not stab on my BACK!!! come stab right to my face!! In front of me! Face to face!!! Be FAIR)) LOL
My sweetheart,Niah^____^ now I’ll pass on some of my strengths to you too. Take it and be strong, smile and be my lovely Niah… forever…. (((Embrace)))
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Gnj4meeeeeee, Thank you for your comment and thank you for taking time to read it too. I know you are busy working and doing load things. But you always have some time to leave me a comment! (((I love you)))
I will remember to keep one hand with me!! lol Not to write … but to dance…. ((see…. when we go to concert we need to dance and rise one hand up .. like this >>> LOL )) for the poetry, I can use one finger to type that’s fine for me. LOL
Let’s go to concert one day!!!! yeahhh rock and roll)))
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MR LION)))))
I am SORRY I 'm late reply to your COMMENT >__<///
I think I talked too much before so I didnt notice you... lol
Okay, I will not talk too much this time.... just wanna say THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENT AND THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH FOR YOUR NICE AND KIND TO ME AS ALWAYS AND THANK YOU THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR BEING SUCH A SWEEEEEEET PERSON.. ---
THANK YOU!
lol
aM i TALK too much again? lol hope not. lolol