Thoughts

Thoughts, oh my heavy thoughts,
From you there is nowhere to hide.
Thoughts just like misty clouds
That overcast the sky above.
Thoughts in the dark of night
As offsprings of my daily life.
Thoughts rushing, bothering much
So oftentimes I'm off my task.
Thoughts bringing no relief,
But rather adding to my strife.
Thoughts interfering with peace
that I would rather seek and find.
Thoughts relishing in tantalizing mind
So agonized with endless fight.
Thoughts feeding on my restless soul
Till out of breath I seek respite.
Thoughts, oh my heavy thoughts,
Reflecting emptiness of life,
Leave me alone, please let me go,
I want it back, my peace of mind.

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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
Being in a mood like this needs cheering up.

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andrew149
Thankyou Marikia....I was once told that the darkest hour is always the one just before dawn....I learned that there is a certain amount of truth in that.....good read as well....Andrew...xxxcool
Fellsman
Hi Marikia

Poignant and melancholy, and beautifully written...

Bill hug
Odette67
Till out of breath I seek respite.
Thoughts, oh my heavy thoughts,
Reflecting emptiness of life,
Leave me alone, please let me go,
I need so much my peace of mind.

This poem brings to my mind my feeling's, when I am in a dark place in my mind, I call it the lunatic inside my head.

Superb poem Marikia.

teddybear
thesunandthesea
(((I'm cheering you up))))

cheering cheering cheering cheering cheering

CHeerSSSSsss & KISssesSs
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