If Ever

The magic of your eyes is shining from small pic,
Deep inside of the soul it surely does reveal,
The essence of my life is there hiding deep,
For me to search when I'm alone, alone with me.
This photo is explaining world, what is to come,
Love is that wise, your eyes tell me that much,
And it is nonsense when they say that love is blind,
The magic of your eyes tells things invisible to sight.
A mesmerizing state of loving what you are
Is giving sense to days and weeks, and months of mine.
And does it matter if this world turns backwards much?
Should earth change poles it'll matter less than grass,
Cause nothing is more frightful than to lose your love,
To lose this blinking smile of yours in soulful eyes.
Oh dear poet, I respect and honor you so much
For simple poem that's in harmony with mine,
Cause when in love, be even unrequited love,
What's happening to world is no concern of mine.
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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
Again and again when I start writing a comment I am so slow in doing it that my comment gradually grows into a poem. This is as a comment to Fellsman's latest "Just Suppose ..."

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Comments (9)

moonontide
Abeautiful write Marikia.I really enjoyed.bouquet
Toolbar
I might say that there's nothing gradually in the way you perceive reality. Great perspective along with the lines !handshake
niah9
Nice one Marikia...stands on its own....Niahangel teddybear
Ladybee42
That's a wonderful comment marikia - and a really lovely poem
teddybear teddybear
mike7375
Great way to comment, lovely poem Marikia wave
Fellsman
Marikia

I have no comment to make on either your poem or subsequent footnote, other than to register my utter astonishment.
SUMMIT09
heart wings heart wings connection is so beautiful.
boyshchrm6
Lovely "Comment" Marikia. Well done.angel cool comfort dancing
marikia
When it popped up here I thought it won't hurt to repost!
Thank you, dear poets, for your poems, I enjoy them very much! hug bouquet
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