Thrill of It

by jazzy75Houston, Texas, USA

Apr 2011 1,227 Views 30 comments

The Thrill of It…

Inglorious lashing counts with the blink
Of an eye, sleepy with a passionate stare
Lingering, a tasty morsel dreamt between
Teeth, a deliberate pressure…pressing
Where shadows dare to creep, inside
Determination waits and steals a lick
Between the sheets of a huntresses
Soaked skin…damp from the stormy rains
Longing for the next savory bite of meat

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Posted: Apr 2011

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Comments (30)

gvmeu2springfield, Massachusetts USAApr 19, 2011

intense jazz-...youve outdone yourself with this troussel

PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAApr 19, 2011

Jazzy,
Had my full attention. Excellent write. Take care my friend.

jerseygirl50petersburg, Virginia USAApr 19, 2011

Always an original Jazzy,
I enjoyed this piece.

JG..

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaApr 19, 2011

Nice Jazzy...had me thinking on this one...just so full of sensory appeals.

niah9Auckland, New ZealandApr 20, 2011

WOW...certainly has a thrilling base....as always...positively different...Niah

schawalskiCork, IrelandApr 20, 2011

interesting poem jazzy actualy very interesting

moonontideSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 20, 2011

Whoah Jazzy.!!! Ive read the comments and no one states where this takes them. It makes me smile. Because I'm sure its a similar place.Heehe. it makes me think instantly of this and I dont know why.'Isnt it funny how bee like honey'Great write Jazzy::

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusApr 22, 2011

my g.d, Jazzy, its getting hot around here...

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 5, 2011

Thanks gvmeu2 !! Not sure what came over me

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 5, 2011

Pinkpoetress...your feedback is always most welcome....thanks my friend. i hope to be back online in a more regular fashion soon....take care

mike7375Castleblayney, Monaghan IrelandMay 5, 2011

Wild and tasty write..

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 10, 2011

Thanks jerseygirl....I'm so glad you are back at the corner

DaBomb72Mantova, Lombardy ItalyMay 11, 2011

The thrill of it was thrill of me...for few minutes. Great job Jazzy !

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 11, 2011

Wow and wow, enough said.

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 12, 2011

Glad you enjoyed Macduff! It was a bit thrilling to write too! lol

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 12, 2011

Thanks Niah...I like to mix things up once in a while and try my hand at something different. Glad you found meaning

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 12, 2011

Thanks schawalski!! I'm happy you found something in it for you :)

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 12, 2011

Thanks moonontide...it's all in the interpretation of the reader...isn't it! lol.....yeah, there are certain aspects that could be read that way

luvuluvme2Smith Falls, Ontario CanadaMay 13, 2011

Hi Jazzy, all I can say...Hot!:

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 22, 2011

Earlgreytea - lol...

....was feeling a little hungry the day I wrote it!

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 22, 2011

thanks mike - glad it made an impression! lol

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 22, 2011

boyshchrm - need you ask!?!

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 22, 2011

Fellsman - oops! time for another profile update...wouldn't want to reveal all of my secrets!!

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAMay 25, 2011

Odette - Hi...and thank you for your comment...lol! Simple and too the point!

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAMay 25, 2011

I am unsure if I am in the mouth of an aligator or in the throes of passion. I always enjoy your style

gbbgmanVidin, BulgariaMay 25, 2011

Don't know where that came from jazzy, but go back and bring a lot more. What else can I say, when you're on fire.... keep burning!

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainMay 26, 2011

Tad hot in Houston is it Jazz??, great write as usual
rob

RAEL266LIVERPOOL, Merseyside, England UKJun 14, 2011

IT'S 4 AM AND I WAS JUST ABOUT TO SWITCH OFF AND GO TO SLEEP, NOW I'M WIDE AWAKE!!
I LOVE YOUR SYLE YOU PAINT ENDURING PICTURES IN THE MIND!
KEEP IT UP!
RAEL

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAJun 22, 2011

Hi luvuluvme2....it has been Hot in Houston!! Luckily we are getting a little rain today....I hope it continues. Thanks for stopping by to comment.

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAAug 4, 2011

Happygolucky4u ---both?!?!? lol...depends on your mood when reading it....I guess...lol! thanks for your generous comments... 'as always'....take care.

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