I met your X the other day Just to hear what he had to say He said, 'U and I should let it B I said, 'I thought U fit me 2 the T He said, 'I should watch my P's and Q's I said, 'It's up 2 me who I choose He said, 'R U sure it's not your doom? I said, 'I C Y she left so soon He said, 'This was just the B-ginning' I said, 'No, this is your N!'
Very modern prose..and funny dialog...looks like something I might read on my teenager's facebook page......I like it!!
SUMMIT09DALLAS, Texas USAApr 29, 2011
i love this lol
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 29, 2011
Ty Yank.. It does look a lil' like a teenage cryptic lettering thing.lol. Only they can do it to where Scotland Yard couldn't break the code.lol.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 29, 2011
Ty summit..especially for the lovely comments on a few of my other poems.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 29, 2011
Ty pink..Glad it was worth a smile.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 29, 2011
Ty Tip.' I guess 'X' hit the spot.lol.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 29, 2011
Ty pilgrim..I think your riddles took a toll on me.lol
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 29, 2011
Ty mcradloff.. Just foolin' around with the letter X.lol
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaApr 29, 2011
Nice one Cafe....almost didn't recognize you with the new pic....a clever write.
DaBomb72Mantova, Lombardy ItalyApr 30, 2011
Caffetwo, my old buddy, this is awesome writing ! Do you have any idea how this folds my soul these days ? I allow myself the feeling of dedication. Thank you man !
am happy dat 2day am not B Z, so I hav time 2 come read poem hereā¦ Mr. Café, -- r u da 1 who wrote dis poem? I never seen a poem like dis b4! Koo! lol c ya l8!
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Made me smile this morning. I enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing.
What's going on? I am trying to wind down here..
Do you have any idea how this folds my soul these days ?
I allow myself the feeling of dedication. Thank you man !
Cafe