just how much does this world weigh? when we're standing on a mountaintop depends on our location you'd say different at the bottom of Mariana drop
strictly physical parametrical laws cannot outweigh those emotional jaws that grab us, grip us, tight in hand and send our hearts to another land
where smiles are gone, burdened, bent the weight beyond what Atlas can bare a souls depressed tangential descent even gods can't overcome that despair
melancholia bears a universal weight everyone on the planet knows the feeling millions of humanity do deeply relate grief and sadness sets souls to reeling
and forces us to carry, if only awhile the weight of the world, too many miles yet the heavy burden can be put aside and level horizons viewed and applied
techniques are many to betray it's gravity toward happier days with family and friends defeating diabolical depressions depravity so melancholia concludes, a means to end
Hi, agoodguy2have, The world must bear the weight of each of us. just how much does this world weigh? As the poet answers, it's a relative thing. I'm sure Atlas would agree, it is certainly less a burden when shared and spirits rise. Such a heavy write this is.
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAMay 6, 2011
GoodGuy, This was one intense, heavy poem. Something always to get me thinking. Thanks for sharing.
Somehow missed this poem at the time it was posted. We all are or have been more or less afflicted with melancholia, depression, we all have our share of weight to carry and it's good if there is someone who could hold the load for us for a while. It is much worse if depression grows into clinical - 'diabolical' condition - in this case the role of family and friends grows in geometrical progression. You describe human emotional condition with a vividness of a connoisseur. Thanks for the attached literature.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 1, 2011
That as always a good read gg, but with weighty reading to go with it, sometimes I reckon the weight of the world at times helps us grow. Mean way to grow as you say.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKAug 1, 2011
Those thoughts are weightier than the world....and although unseen...and extremely tangible. Great write my friend
purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKAug 1, 2011
Just read this poem agoodguy and 3rd 6th verse says it all for me. The whole poem is deep and there is a strong message there. I believe I've been to this land once or twice, but never no more... Thanks for the write..
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The world must bear the weight of each of us. just how much does this world weigh? As the poet answers, it's a relative thing. I'm sure Atlas would agree, it is certainly less a burden when shared and spirits rise. Such a heavy write this is.
This was one intense, heavy poem. Something always to get me thinking. Thanks for sharing.
A philosophical gem...
Best wishes
Bill