the weight of the world

just how much does this world weigh?
when we're standing on a mountaintop
depends on our location you'd say
different at the bottom of Mariana drop

strictly physical parametrical laws
cannot outweigh those emotional jaws
that grab us, grip us, tight in hand
and send our hearts to another land

where smiles are gone, burdened, bent
the weight beyond what Atlas can bare
a souls depressed tangential descent
even gods can't overcome that despair

melancholia bears a universal weight
everyone on the planet knows the feeling
millions of humanity do deeply relate
grief and sadness sets souls to reeling

and forces us to carry, if only awhile
the weight of the world, too many miles
yet the heavy burden can be put aside
and level horizons viewed and applied

techniques are many to betray it's gravity
toward happier days with family and friends
defeating diabolical depressions depravity
so melancholia concludes, a means to end

© agoodguy2have 2011-05-05
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Posted: May 2011

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niah9
What a weighty write...goodguy2have.....but interesting too.....Niahconversing yay
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
The world must bear the weight of each of us. just how much does this world weigh? As the poet answers, it's a relative thing. I'm sure Atlas would agree, it is certainly less a burden when shared and spirits rise. Such a heavy write this is.
Pinkpoetress
GoodGuy,
This was one intense, heavy poem. Something always to get me thinking. Thanks for sharing.
marikia
Somehow missed this poem at the time it was posted. We all are or have been more or less afflicted with melancholia, depression, we all have our share of weight to carry and it's good if there is someone who could hold the load for us for a while. It is much worse if depression grows into clinical - 'diabolical' condition - in this case the role of family and friends grows in geometrical progression. You describe human emotional condition with a vividness of a connoisseur. Thanks for the attached literature.bouquet
Redex
That as always a good read gg, but with weighty reading to go with it, sometimes I reckon the weight of the world at times helps us grow. Mean way to grow as you say.doh teddybear
Fellsman
Hi Good Guy

A philosophical gem...

Best wishes

Bill cheers
jazzy75
Those thoughts are weightier than the world....and although unseen...and extremely tangible. Great write my friendhug
purpledragonfly
Just read this poem agoodguy and 3rd 6th verse says it all for me. The whole poem is deep and there is a strong message there. I believe I've been to this land once or twice, but never no more... Thanks for the write..handshake professor
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