Good bye :-(

I tried to let go....but its hard for me to do.
When I have one hand always holding on to you.
If I would release.... You'd just fly so high.
Not even a whisper a word of good bye.
Your colors are here for the world to see.
But I keep on holding you close to me.
Now the time has come.
And I must let you fly.
So I will start to run.
Where you can reach the sky.
It will be clear sailing into the blue.
To places I don't know.
But I will release and let you go.
May your journey be a good one.
May you reach your permanent home.
In a gush of wind my friend you are gone.
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Posted: May 2011
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hmmm Anybody seen my kite. I let go of the string please





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gnj4u
Hi, Happygolucky4u,
Ah, the letting go...though, unlike people, kites fare better with strings! This fun read is chocked full of meaning. AND, I am relieved you are not saying Good bye :-( to us!
agoodguy2have
H.G.L. you had me goin' for a bit, then i landed in a poem-eating tree! lol ;-)
schawalski
clever writing happygolucky
venusenvy
Bump grin
jazzy75
perhaps its finding will make a little ones day....inventive poem handshake
Happygolucky4u
Thanks gnj4u for thinking it is a fun read. It was a fun write too. I love kites. But anymore I think I will just watch others fly themmoping
Happygolucky4u
@ Agoodguy2have. Oh no wow A kite eating tree.uh oh
boyshchrm6
Fun write with deeper meaning I believe HappygoLucky.
angel comfort peace teddybear
niah9
Lovely poem...loved it...had to smile.....niahsmitten teddybear
Happygolucky4u
Thank you schawalski for your comment. As much as I love your writing I treasure your commentwine
Happygolucky4u
Venusenvy thank you for stopping inteddybear
trurorob
Thought you was getting on your bike then S, kite is more fun though, nice one!
rob
thesunandthesea
HAPPPYYYYYY )))))teddybear



Yeahh peace I'm happy to read your poem! Enjoyable read!! heehe ^__^ heart wings


On the other hand, hmmm are you tryin to tell us MEN are like KITES or something? ^0^ First we have set it free, ^__^ but when it goes too far, mumbling we need to pull it back,conversing yet if we pull it too slow, it will be flown away... sigh And that we 'll have to let it go finally.... crying

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and we go BUY a NEW kite! lol :p grin
Fellsman
Hi Happygolucky4u

Letting go is often the hardest thing to do - a whimsical and fun narrative. I hope the kite eventually found a good home... wave

Regards

Bill hug
Odette67
Loved this. applause cheering
Earlgreytea
beautiful and clever allegory... applause
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