I tried to let go....but its hard for me to do. When I have one hand always holding on to you. If I would release.... You'd just fly so high. Not even a whisper a word of good bye. Your colors are here for the world to see. But I keep on holding you close to me. Now the time has come. And I must let you fly. So I will start to run. Where you can reach the sky. It will be clear sailing into the blue. To places I don't know. But I will release and let you go. May your journey be a good one. May you reach your permanent home. In a gush of wind my friend you are gone.
Hi, Happygolucky4u, Ah, the letting go...though, unlike people, kites fare better with strings! This fun read is chocked full of meaning. AND, I am relieved you are not saying Good bye :-( to us!
Yeahh I'm happy to read your poem! Enjoyable read!! heehe ^__^
On the other hand, are you tryin to tell us MEN are like KITES or something? ^0^ First we have set it free, ^__^ but when it goes too far, we need to pull it back, yet if we pull it too slow, it will be flown away... And that we 'll have to let it go finally....
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and we go BUY a NEW kite! lol :p
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKJun 5, 2011
Hi Happygolucky4u
Letting go is often the hardest thing to do - a whimsical and fun narrative. I hope the kite eventually found a good home...
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Ah, the letting go...though, unlike people, kites fare better with strings! This fun read is chocked full of meaning. AND, I am relieved you are not saying Good bye :-( to us!
rob
Yeahh I'm happy to read your poem! Enjoyable read!! heehe ^__^
On the other hand, are you tryin to tell us MEN are like KITES or something? ^0^ First we have set it free, ^__^ but when it goes too far, we need to pull it back, yet if we pull it too slow, it will be flown away... And that we 'll have to let it go finally....
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and we go BUY a NEW kite! lol :p
Letting go is often the hardest thing to do - a whimsical and fun narrative. I hope the kite eventually found a good home...
Regards
Bill