A HANGING AT CRAGGAN MOOR

A rattle of keys, a floorboard creaks,
Click of a latch, a rusty door hinge squeaks,
A cold wind comes in through a window, up the corridor,
A tendril of green mist creeps,
In through the crack of the part open door,
Day things give way to night things,
It’s time for the bell,
It swings,
It rings,
Rats scurry,
Bats flurry,
As it echoes across the valley,
The hangman once more tallies his tally,
Carves one more notch upon his stick,
The prison clock on Midnight, ticks it’s final tick,
Final plea for forgiveness been plead,
The Preachers final word of prayer has been said,
For one unfortunate, it’s the end of the line,
The Gov’nor checks the clock, gives a nod, it’s time,
The trapdoor opens…..But, the rope doesn’t go taught,
Things don’t go quite as they thought,
For, between a puff of green smoke,
And, the hangman’s disbelieving choke,
All that remained was a pile of her clothes,
Green mist oozing from every stitch,
Turns out, history will record….
She REALLY was a witch!
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
Bet that had you going, you ghoulish lot...LOL....Andrew...xxx

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schawalski
great twist andrew and what a build up tooapplause
kickit22
great twist indeed but i must say i can't get passed that pile of cloths that just remained now you have a nakid witch flying around. wow kickit..
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
Green mist oozing from every stitch,... The devil is in the details and you handle them with finesse. It's good to have the rattle...creaks... and ...squeaks of your poems, once again, in Poet's Corner!
andrew149
Thanks for your kind comment Shawalski, great to get a good welcome after being away, due to illness not choice, I hasten to add....anyway it's great to be back.....Andrew....cool
niah9
glad you're back...you was missed.....I have enquiries asking after you, so you were certainly missed.....you are special part of PC Andrew...and great write as always....hope you are feeling better...Niahbanana teddybear
jazzy75
Up to your ghoulish ways...i see my friend!! lol....a haunting story...that begs for more!!applause
Odette67
Very good, good imagination. Nice to see you back Andrew.applause
SundaySilence
Green mist....nice.
andrew149
Thankyou kickit for your concern but methinks she has got it "Covered".....lol....Andrew...cool
petalblossoms
I love this Andrews. I can see her weave her way through this poem. Wonderful. And she does nees a sequelcheering
boyshchrm6
Suspenseful Andrew. You really conveyed the feeling
of an old fashioned hanging and a twist at the end
that left us awed. TY cool angel thumbs up grin cheers
trurorob
well done Andrew, got me!
rob
agoodguy2have
andrew, you had us goin' fer sure! i can hear her cackling laugh now from down the hall to the hangin' chamber sayin' "chase me to the gate...if you dare....ha ha ha ha ha..." whew! ;-)
andrew149
Thankyou gnj4u, as always you are very kind, I am very pleased that you enjoyed it.....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
Thankyou very much niah, very pleased I was missed, though not so pleased I was away......Pleased you enjoyed the read too....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
lol...thankyou Jaz....You know me!...hahahahahha.....Andrew...xxxcool
Earlgreytea
Good one Andrew, you shine at tales like this one... applause
andrew149
Thank you EGT, pleased you enjoyed it...Happy Halloween!.....Andrewcool
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