liquid sky pouring down being sucked up by straws on the curvesive ground cosmic rays beaming down giving us much delight orbiting rock distant glare reaches the darkness with a soft bright colors of the arch that scrapes the clouds seduces the eye sounds of thunder echos through the air shriviling my ears misty cloud fogging my eyes BUT your poetic style charming ways sooths my soul.
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
reading all your poems with out question sooths the soul thank you. maybe soon i'll change it back to yes you. lol.
Reading poems has a soothing as well as invigorating effect on us. I can't agree more with what you say, Kickit, and the process of writing poetry is no less enticing judging by the imagery of this poem. Thank you very much.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJun 6, 2011
kickit....you are a wonder.....such a change of style, and all so varied.....niah
to have lost a treasure of life of works in a matter where not even a soul could bare his/her eyes upon the words that lay on a piece of paper to have the wisdom seep into one's mind, for the chance that it could change the course of ones own life journey would be a tragic loss not only to the person that could be affected by such works but to everybody else who would be the potential readers of what could be in turn inspire another ones own feelings to come out of the depths oh ones soul. I have also published a book called Matter of life: Simply Hard, which is subjected to the soul of the earth and the destruction man has done and is doing to her. I think that both your love and life to the human soul and my works to the soul of the earth work in a common ground which we share for the better ment of mankind and earth, best regards, kick...
I have grown fond of that the use of liquid also because it has the feeling of movement in a way you cannot explain in another form. You cannot go wrong in using this word to expand or to enhance one's work.. thank you so kind for stopping in, leaving such a generous commentl.
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Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 1, 2012
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I just love that word "Liquid" I am tempted to use it in every poem I write...How crazy is that? Lovely poem Kick.
to have lost a treasure of life of works in a matter where not even a soul could bare his/her eyes upon the words that lay on a piece of paper to have the wisdom seep into one's mind, for the chance that it could change the course of ones own life journey would be a tragic loss not only to the person that could be affected by such works but to everybody else who would be the potential readers of what could be in turn inspire another ones own feelings to come out of the depths oh ones soul. I have also published a book called Matter of life: Simply Hard, which is subjected to the soul of the earth and the destruction man has done and is doing to her. I think that both your love and life to the human soul and my works to the soul of the earth work in a common ground which we share for the better ment of mankind and earth, best regards, kick...
I have grown fond of that the use of liquid also because it has the feeling of movement in a way you cannot explain in another form. You cannot go wrong in using this word to expand or to enhance one's work.. thank you so kind for stopping in, leaving such a generous commentl.
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