Poets poetry

liquid sky pouring down
being sucked up by
straws on the curvesive ground
cosmic rays beaming down
giving us much delight
orbiting rock distant glare
reaches the darkness with a soft bright
colors of the arch that scrapes the clouds
seduces the eye
sounds of thunder
echos through the air
shriviling my ears
misty cloud fogging my eyes
BUT
your poetic style charming ways
sooths my soul.
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
reading all your poems with out question sooths the soul
thank you. maybe soon i'll change it back to yes you. lol.

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marikiaonline today!
Reading poems has a soothing as well as invigorating effect on us. I can't agree more with what you say, Kickit, and the process of writing poetry is no less enticing judging by the imagery of this poem. Thank you very much.bouquet
niah9
kickit....you are a wonder.....such a change of style, and all so varied.....niah teddybear yay
trurorob
yep, reading poetry definitely has that soothing effect
rob
kickit22
your so right marikia. thank you. handshake kickit.
kickit22
niah your a doll.. this for you. teddybear hug kickit..
jazzy75
What a beautiful tribute to all the wonderful poets here on the corner! thumbs up thumbs up
kickit22
i know when i'm stressed and i read some poetry it's like a magic pill. thank you trurob.

kickit.
kickit22
thank you so kind jazzy. i thought the title yes you makes it more personal then just saying pc friends or such. kickit.
fairy_feather
nice poem.. peace
kickit22
gnj, profile deleted, cafetwo and swade, never thanked you for your wonderful comments such sweet generous friends poets you have become in my life. cheers

mike.
reguiny2006
You emphasis that poetry is the emotion of the soul, and without it, where would we be? Regards, Phil.
Odette67
liquid sky pouring down

I just love that word "Liquid" I am tempted to use it in every poem I write...How crazy is that? Lovely poem Kick. hug purple heart
kickit22
reguiny hello

to have lost a treasure of life of works in a matter where not even a soul could bare his/her eyes upon the words that lay on a piece of paper to have the wisdom seep into one's mind, for the chance that it could change the course of ones own life journey would be a tragic loss not only to the person that could be affected by such works but to everybody else who would be the potential readers of what could be in turn inspire another ones own feelings to come out of the depths oh ones soul. I have also published a book called Matter of life: Simply Hard, which is subjected to the soul of the earth and the destruction man has done and is doing to her. I think that both your love and life to the human soul and my works to the soul of the earth work in a common ground which we share for the better ment of mankind and earth, best regards, kick...
kickit22
Hi Odette,

I have grown fond of that the use of liquid also because it has the feeling of movement in a way you cannot explain in another form. You cannot go wrong in using this word to expand or to enhance one's work.. thank you so kind for stopping in, leaving such a generous commentl. hug

kick
Poetnumber1
Lovely imagery and poem that stands as truth Mikehead banger wine
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