a forever marriage

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Jun 2011 444 Views 12 comments

a forever marriage

harvested fields
eating corn

burning wood
candle sticks

seasoned flowers
dozen roses

looking in your eyes
giving you my soul

holding your hand
giving you my flesh

walking down boardwalk
marrying you

cooking for one
a family of 12

holding you in my arms
before were dearly departed

for my life
you been a good wife.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jun 2011

About this poem:

candles and roses represents the dating life
and so on..
no wife yet but to think of one day
some good thoughts ...

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Comments (12)

iamwhoiamyouseeanywhere, Bavaria GermanyJun 12, 2011

Morning..this is a nice poem and these lines I think we all want
for us
holding you in my arms
before were dearly departed

since I believe that what we are afraid of is to die alone,(even if we don't admit to it ) with no one to send us off on the last journey.

Well done..

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 12, 2011

Mornen Iam

life is great but to leave it after a few years especially alone is disheartning.
glad you liked this. thank you.

kickit.

niah9Auckland, New ZealandJun 12, 2011

I have to agree with iam....mt fear has always been to die alone....another different write kickit...niah

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAJun 12, 2011

Hi, kickit22,
One looking for a forever marriage may want to reconsider a family of 12!

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAJun 12, 2011

wooOwww ^____^

sweeeeeeeeet!!!

ps. a family of 12??? are you willing to build a football team or something??

deliciousdamselDothan, Alabama USAJun 12, 2011

Beautiful!

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 12, 2011

Hi Niah.

for some reason i don't think your alone. i know couple of people that are in the same situation. including me. thank you dear you won't be alone for along i'm sure.

kickit.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 12, 2011

Hi Gnj4u

Well i must say 12 seems to be alot but we have to keep in mind that there are grandchildren that make up this family of 12..
this poem goes from young in love to marriage to having 2 or 3 maybe 4 kids and they having kids to being together on the last days of life. i don't think reconsideration is necessary.

kickit.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 12, 2011

Hi SAS

awwwwwwwwwwwwww shuccccccccckssssssss..

what can i say..

p.s. like i explained to gnj4u the family of 12 includes the grandkids. but a football team

we better make it a family of 14 to be safe. in case one of them breaks a leg.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJun 12, 2011

Hi deliciousdamsel

thank you glad you liked my writting.

kickit.