by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA
Jun 2011 717 Views 21 comments
beautifully irresistable
your beautifully irresistable
your misserable
its written in your eyes
for your soul does not lie
your smile lights up
in a room full of people
but your misserable
beautifully irresistable
you'll try and hide it
but you won't deny it
for your soul does not lie
your beautifully
Irr E sis T able
stay up at night
looking at the sky
with a tear in your eye
wondering why
for your misserable
but you just don't know why
a falling star
crosses your eyes
for its
beautiful irresistable
and now you know why
your misserable
they see your
irresistable beauty
from afar
don't know who you
really are
your beautifully irresistable
misserably
alone
your misserable
its written in your eyes
for your soul does not lie
your smile lights up
in a room full of people
but your misserable
beautifully irresistable
you'll try and hide it
but you won't deny it
for your soul does not lie
your beautifully
Irr E sis T able
stay up at night
looking at the sky
with a tear in your eye
wondering why
for your misserable
but you just don't know why
a falling star
crosses your eyes
for its
beautiful irresistable
and now you know why
your misserable
they see your
irresistable beauty
from afar
don't know who you
really are
your beautifully irresistable
misserably
alone
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Posted: Jun 2011
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Comments (21)
Niah
Though, from afar don't know who you really are, I do know that beautifully irresistable is beautifully poignant.
thank you dear.
irresistable beauty
from afar
don't know who you
really are"
....happy is the keeper of the key !
I like it !
Freckles
i really think we tend to look in the wrong places for answers sometimes the answers is right in front of our eyes but we are so blinded as humans we tend not to see it. i think we miss most of our own answers and go on in life with struggling to find the answers. glad you liked this thank you. kickit.
indeeed always smiling when i see a comment posted by you. thank you dear.
to recieve any type of compliment commen from a great writer as yourself that in itself is an achievement but to recieve a compliment as you just posted that is really special thank you my friend.
as far as driving see andrew i only post the good stuff which is only about 5% of my thinking. you wouldn't want to hear the rest
me? lol
Loved that 'beautifully irresistable'
beautiful write. ^__^
have to agree with you on that there are couple other woman on here that would also fall into that catagory. thank you my friend glad you like this..
cannot deny you are absolutely beautifully irresistable not very many people on here would dissagree with that if any at all.
not sure if your misserable tho you don't seeem to be maybe a little lonely but nah you couldn't be misserable.
glad you liked my misserably poem..
kickit..
artfully eulogize misery.,
and the most creative three words ever put in a sentence.
that should go on the top of the iconic phrase ever mouthed.
kickit..
Your mention of this write being more of an analogy of people here, put a whole new spin on it. Hmm... I'm not irresistable, but I'm generally not miserable either, even when alone.
However, feeling lonely... yes, that can be miserable. And the P.C. is a great place to feel less alone.
Hope you feel less alone, kickit, as you post here. You certainly make others feel better with your poems, comments and replies!
you know i think you are irresistable. this posted comment has just proved it how can you not be.
you are so generous with those words you spoke literally my heart skipped a beat when i read that it has touched me a great deal. thank you.
i'll tell ya too me you sure don't seem to be misserable and it really shows in your comments you are beautifully irresistable missy. your right pc is a great place to get unlonely as i found out today.
michael