My invisable friend

by itchywitchGalway, Ireland

Jun 2011 945 Views 14 comments

My invisable friend

I did not see you
when you came to me
touched me you did not
but you made me feel.
whisperd in my ear
yet you never spoke
dried my tears
without a stroke.

my darkness you brightend
my sleeping you made easy
my mornings worth rising to
you have given me reason.

i'm glad that your back
again, i'll never let you go
lost without you i was
my invisable good friend.. HOPE.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jun 2011

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itchywitchOPgalway, Galway IrelandJun 22, 2011

oops and sorry im new to this poetry corner thing,kinda forgot my explanation of the poem, what can i say what i mean about it but all we need is hope

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJun 22, 2011

I think this is quite a gem itchy..' I 'Hope' you write more..many more..

itchywitchOPgalway, Galway IrelandJun 22, 2011

why thank you kindly cafe,i like to play around with poetry but expressing ones meaning in words dont come that easy to a witch.. but we learn as we go on

itchywitchOPgalway, Galway IrelandJun 22, 2011

why thank you kindly cafe,i like to play around with poetry but expressing ones meaning in words dont come that easy to a witch.. but we learn as we go on

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJun 22, 2011

I guess you'll have to use your broom to sweep out the wrong words so you can find 'witch' ones you want.lol.

itchywitchOPgalway, Galway IrelandJun 22, 2011

hmmm not only are you charming your witty too

and a man of words also i see

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJun 22, 2011

The Tin Man might be upset if he knew I had charmed a witch..

Country47-, Oslo NorwayJun 23, 2011

that was good ,
love the stile

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKJun 23, 2011

Hi itchywitch

A real whimsical poem with a great message: Regarding the "About this poem" section, it is entirely optional whether you complete this section or not - some poetry does not require any further explanatory notes.

Welcome to PC.

Best wishes

Fellsman (Bill).

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAJun 23, 2011

I agree, some poems need no 'explanation' - this one certainly qualifies!! "HOPE" is ALWAYS a welcomed friend!

(so too are FAITH and CHARITY!)

Welcome itchy to the corner where there are no strangers, only friends you haven't met yet!!

RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 23, 2011

First off a lovely welcome to you this was a lovely poem too

Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USAJun 23, 2011

Hope sounds immortal... but let's not throw water on it....in this world of so many dissapointments it's refreshing to know someone cares...even if it's a thought from far away....nice write.

itchywitchOPgalway, Galway IrelandJun 23, 2011

to one and all thank you for your kind comments

iv been reading some poems here and WOW very enjoyable im going to enjoy this page

DaBomb72Mantova, Lombardy ItalyJun 25, 2011

Itchywitch...this is so beautiful. Entrusting inner hopes and fears to an immaterial friend. Reading and giving a thought was delightful. Thank you for sharing this one !

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