i wanted to

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Jul 2011 483 Views 7 comments

i wanted to

wanted to call you

but i'm not

wanted to hear your voice

but i won't

wanted to lower your dress
run my fingers on your back

but i'm not

wanted to stand behind you
put my arms around you

but i won't

wanted to lay here with you
touch your feet with my toes

but i'm not

wanted to graze your arms
with the palm of my hand

but i won't

wanted to tell you
i love you

but i'm not

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Posted: Jul 2011

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i would but don't know where your at..

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Comments (7)

RedexNorthumberland, England UKJul 7, 2011

sad, but funny one Kickit one day YOU WILL

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaJul 7, 2011

Nice poem. Always so funny. Thanks.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 7, 2011

Beautiful though rather poignant poem Kickit.

steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaJul 7, 2011

How true ...how true...very poignant poem

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAJul 7, 2011

Hi, kickit22,
Loving is being, at its best. It's sad when we have "evolved" to a point where we cannot be open and honest about our true feelings with those that are important to us. While to lower your dress does require mutual consent, telling someone i love you, when truly felt, is a beautiful thing - even if the other person does not return that same feeling. Poignant, indeed.

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaJul 7, 2011

I love it Kickit....its romantic without being overly sentimental..that takes skill...well done.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAJul 8, 2011

thank you all my friends for your wonderful comments.
may all your days be filled with sun shine even on the days of rain.
cheers to all hugs to the ladys.

kickit.

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