wheres my rem

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Sep 2009 663 Views 8 comments

~where's my rem ~

Where's my Rem where did ya go, ya been there so long where did ya go, sleepin awake's jus way to slow where is my Rem where did you go, toss with toes out, toss with em in where did my Rem go where have you been, sleeps so awake dreams mind not fakes, Rem where'd you go tonight's far to slow, minds now tucked in . . . . can we both go . . . . ~

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Posted: Sep 2009

About this poem:

A sleepless night! We all get them:)

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Shewolf55Columbia, South Carolina USASep 9, 2009

What a lovely ode to such an ugly thing. Insomnia. Yuck on it. The poem however is really cute. Thanks for sharing.

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 9, 2009

Lol ty Shewolf, as levity with all the misfits of life works:) cheers:)

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USASep 11, 2009

Insomnia~the bane of sleep-deprived poets everywhere! Thanks Bentlee!

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 11, 2009

its the lack of sleep wot makes me think, poetry write, ideas come in middle of night, the more cocoa I drink, still doesn't make me sleep though, just more think.....lol.....thankyou bentlee, very good....

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USASep 11, 2009

Just couldn't resist a "wee" poem in there? Good One Andrew!

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 11, 2009

Yawn. . . . . stretch . . . . . watered eyes lol, yeah it must be Tough Ama. About one night a month it happens here:)

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 11, 2009

cheers ama, and good evening....xxx

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 11, 2009

Lol, Andrew an as Ama said good flow eh:) an in order ta sleep ya gotta hit the bed lol:)

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