what in world

by hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia, USA

Jul 2011 725 Views 11 comments

what in the world?

check your emotions at the door, ladies and gentlemen
you are about to embark on a journey
fastly, you will be among others
from all corners of the world
words will be processed and set before you
how you interpret and deal with those words may seem to be personal
and the whole wide world is watching
so......
relax, it's not really personal
merely words on a screen
so, again, laugh, sing, do the cha cha cha....
join in and dance
roll with the waves
keep your head above water...and
you will forever ride the perfect wave...

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Posted: Jul 2011

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Comments (11)

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainJul 27, 2011

quite appropriate Hedi and well said
Rob

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAJul 27, 2011

Going into the curl my friend....It's a perfect 10.

gbbgmanVidin, BulgariaJul 27, 2011

purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKJul 27, 2011

The waves are fine hedi It's the surfing could be dodgy. Your words are food for thought, good for the psyche. Nice one.

country_lady67clarion, Pennsylvania USAJul 27, 2011

narley dude

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAJul 27, 2011

Hi, hedistuff,
Yes, if we ever hope to actualize world peace, we must start somewhere! And, Poet's Corner is as good a place as any. Thank you for sharing.

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJul 28, 2011

Thankyou Hedi well said, would be good if some re-read the guidance notes...especially the bit about encouragement in comments.....and what was the other thing...Oh yes, if One doesn't like something, DON'T COMMENT....pass it by....Peace is then enjoyed by all....I for one enjoy the tranquility of this place and get very upset when some people take it upon themselves to disturb it, not only causing one person to leave, but also other sensitive souls too....Lest we forget, many come here for a little self healing as well as to write....WE ARE NOT ALL PERFECT POETS!....And Might I suggest that if a certain person doesn't like the peaceful way that this place seems to run most of the time....That they LEAVE....Just as soon as they like.....Kindest regards Hedi and I am sorry that I commented in this way on here, but the person I am referring to has now been responsible for too many people leaving in the last few months....Enough is enough!

niah9Auckland, New ZealandJul 28, 2011

Great write Hedi...I remember when I was just a shadow that hovered till Ben...gotitall....coaxed me to comment.
Aware then we were telling the world, one soon forgets, and that's good, like a comfy armchair programme with words amongst friends...so thanks Hedi and thanks Andrew, for putting the words to many thoughts....Niah