self imprisonment

by hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia, USA

Aug 2011 621 Views 5 comments

self imprisonment

of late my life feels to be in a drought
for your love, I have been too long without
it could be from drinking way too much stout
which makes me appear and act like a lout
casts me in a bad light, there is no doubt
bemoaning the heavens, I scream and shout
then crawl to a corner and merely pout
I know you know what I'm talking about
how do I shed this skin, let myself out?

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Posted: Aug 2011

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Comments (5)

country_lady67clarion, Pennsylvania USAAug 5, 2011

very nice Hedi... Sometimes the zipper gets stuck ..if you wiggle it ( or ask for help) .. you can let yourself out

hedistuffOPLayopolis, West Virginia USAAug 5, 2011

I'll keep you in mind...lady.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAAug 5, 2011

Put the cork in the bottle

Maybe a drought is not all that bad Mr Stuff. My life here lately seems like it has been in a sewer

But just keep in mind once you let the genie out of the bottle it is not so easy to get it back in

Ok I can see I am of no help. Have a good weekend

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAAug 6, 2011

Hi, hedistuff,
how do I shed this skin, let myself out? Don't know, but it's time! I know you know what I'm talking about... - even if I don't!

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusAug 6, 2011

[how do I shed this skin, let myself out?]

what a graphic phrase, and the question of the ages, of course, i think you already know how, yeah, just trust yourself, its different for each and every one of us, just trust..., and C'est la vie..., no question that we know, the thing is most of us are too afraid to act on our intuition, present company excluded, of course... take care dear friend..., of course, this is all just poetic licence..., lol...