i'm quitting you again because i want to because i can not so much to walk away but to come back and make up from this little row that we're about to have
i told you once i'll tell you again that i'm in love with you
so this walk i'm gonna take if not for mine then for your sake so you'll again be able to see me coming back to your forgiveness
This reminds me of a couple I knew that would actually fight for the makeup loving nicely done
elo777santa cruz, California USAAug 12, 2011
this is great GG I am glad you posted here too. I so wanted to comment on the poems in the contest. I hope everybody joins in. it is neat to see how everybody's different thoughts and feelings form about an idea giving it depth and perspective from different viewpoints....elo
piccaboo3865edgewood, Maryland USAAug 13, 2011
Well put. I new to this site and am enjoying the poetry the most. I read a couple of your poems and think your really quite good. I look forward to read more.
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