She Dances Like a Flower

by Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont, USA

Aug 2011 653 Views 10 comments

She Dances Like a Flower

She danced and wouldn't stop
Like a breeze keeps on blowing
A flower flutters like a heartbeat
She moved like a whirling top
Her feet just keeps on flowing
A native in cadance with a drumbeat
She lifted her soul to be caught
by the sunset soft and on glowing
A sacred dance never to complete

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Posted: Aug 2011

About this poem:

Beauty in perpetual motion

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Comments (10)

niah9Auckland, New ZealandAug 13, 2011

Beautiful write Yankee4you...not sure if its because it's about dance, but I think this is your best ever.....

niah

purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKAug 13, 2011

Perpetual motion was a lesson my dad gave us at home when I was eleven yrs.old and for two years we learned much.I loove this poem. Thank You.xx.

Yankee4youOPSt. Albans, Vermont USAAug 14, 2011

why thanks...a most heartfelt compliment from you C.... Trying something new here....a three word rynming sequence...where the last words of the first three lines repeats with the next three lines....so on....stop...top....caught....blowing....flowing.....glowing....etc....not sure what you call it?? :)