Wine and Sea

The seas had receded, but they took their time
As if opening that fine bottle of wine
Meant so very little to the uncouth
Ah the blessings of a wasted youth

That had not yet drunk from the cup of wisdom
So our little world was still their kingdom
But the seas would return, sometimes in a rage
And youth would become man, but still no sage

For they still did not savour Chateau Neuf Du Pap
They preferred the rage still to the gentle lap
But give them time, like all fine matured things
They learn perhaps circles are actually rings

But wisdom of age is not the sanctuary of the fool
He learns that the steadiest seat is the three legged stool
But like fine wine the young will eventually mellow
And understand a raging sea is not a good bedfellow

Hasten not though to drink from the sea of tranquillity
Do not let those learning years pass in mediocrity
Read Kipling’s IF as you breathe in the air
And those seas may then be calm and treat you fair

For real learning is not always in a philosophy book
It is in those people you thought old and mistook
For they only fish where the cormorants would circle
For the long race was won not by the hare but the turtle

For time and patience has taught them many things
They learn that not all circles are necessarily rings
Drink slowly the wine and savour the taste
And you just may find those years have not gone to waste
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
I am old enough to know better, unfortunately though not all maturity comes with age!
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agoodguy2have
Rob, what a rhyming poetic romantic you are. This is great stuff, full of wisdom and wit, and tasty lines. "And youth would become man, but still no sage"...I think you're a man who's definitely gotten to the point of giving sage advice, knowing too, that advice is seldom welcome. Well done! ;-)
gnj4u
Hi, trurorob,
Drink slowly the wine and savour the taste... Truly great advice to apply until one notices those that only fish where the cormorants would circle. Youth is a terrible thing to waste.
Earlgreytea
superb, and what rhyme! also a great reminder and an invitation to youth to learn, great, mature write...
steve1223
Excellent read. Makes you feel much better about being mature.
cheers cheers
gbbgman
applause applause applause

A masterful write on the journey of wisdom.
moonontide
This is wonderful poetry Rob.
Drink slowly the wine and savour the taste....of life
Your years have definitely not been wasted to give us this.bouquet
country_lady67
very beautiful Rob..
Drink slowly the wine and savour the taste
And you just may find those years have not gone to waste
purple heart wine wine
hedistuff
only terrific...(though admittedly, I must bone up on my 'cormorants', who 'dey?)
elo777
always a pleasure for me..to read one of your poems trurorob.....elo..wave
pilgrimageoflove
Doesn't get much smoother than this.
handshake
Poetnumber1
Dear Rob
I have been reading this poem and everything said is certainly true,now wisdom comes in the very least expected places and it was an utter delight to read this most enlightening and well composed poem,nice job friendapplause applause handshake wine
Odette67
Stunning write Rob, some superb lines. applause
trurorob
Thanks Dave, most appreciated
rob
trurorob
Thank you Joy, well we all sometimes waste our youth but hopefully we have the time to make up for it!
rob
Happygolucky4u
Great write and I for one like to act a little immature once in a while. Give life a little zing or either scare the hell out of myself. teddybear
trurorob
Thank you Earl, glad you liked it
rob
Macduff5
Hi Rob,

I love wine and I love the sea. Your sage advice...somehow just resonates not Kipling but Hemingway..."The Old Man and the Sea". Nicely done. wine
jazzy75
Rob! A brilliant write my friend....I was impressed today as I was the first time I read it.hug bouquet
piccaboo3865
"The wisdom of age is not the sanctuary of the fool", I love this line. No fool could understand the knowledge that age bestows on a person. If only more people would seek knowledge from older people on life philosophies, they would be able to avoid many pitfall on their own journey. Loved this poem.
Ladybee42
Ahhh! too cool for words Rob,
I shamefully drank a bottle of Chateau Neuf Du Pap that my sister left sitting there in her kitchen and I found myself alone in her house for a few days when I got back to Ireland just recently. blushing (nice stuff!)laugh
With age comes wisdom? but the child in you always remains there no matter how old you are sir - it's just a matter of whether you listen to it any more.
thumbs up thumbs up
niah9
can I say rob...you are a very wise man......no need of pilosophy...life skills....kthumbs up wow rolling on the floor laughing teddybear
great write....as always...
Redex
Oh Rob I missed this poem , this of course is true poetry and the comorant you iether love or hate them, but they know.hug
trurorob
Thanks Steve, keep writing
rob
thelmatalla
Beautiful wisdom rich poem Rob. Love it!!heart beating teddybear heart beating
purpledragonfly
This is such a powerful poem Rob. All I could say and more has been said. Another superb write...handshake dancing
bestversion
Hi Rob,
I like the sea and I like good wine as well... but I like your rhyme the most.
"But the seas would return, sometimes in a rage
And youth would become man, but still no sage"
"Drink slowly the wine and savour the taste
And you just may find those years have not gone to waste"

Your wisdom and philosophy at the same time
sad flower
trurorob
Thanks Stephen
rob
boyshchrm6
Wit and wisdom is Sage advice Rob.angel thumbs up cheers
trurorob
Thank you Moonontide
rob
trurorob
Thank you Country Lady
rob
trurorob
Thanks Hedistuff
rob
Yankee4you
But like fine wine the young will eventually mellow
And understand a raging sea is not a good bedfellow

This poem really speaks to me....trying so hard to quiet the torrents of thoughts and desperation of the daily grind of all work and no play....and no sense of priority at all.....anymore....this speaks volumes about the need for peace and tranquility times in our lives....
trurorob
Thanks Elo777
rob
purpledragonfly
COME ON ALL YOU WISE PEOPLE not yet given a comment on this well lined poem of WISDOM... This is deserving of more compliments... Such a fine write........ handshake beer
trurorob
Thanks Pilgrimageoflove
rob
trurorob
Thanks Poetnumber1
rob
trurorob
Thank you Odette, glad you enjoyed it, wish I could take my own advise!!
rob
trurorob
Thank you Sherri
rob
Maxeen_1
Wine and Sea trurorob
An excellent a masterfull read wisdom you cirtainly have -
I so enjoyed your write..angel thumbs up professor
"For real learning is not always in a
philosophers books....
trurorob
Thanks McDuff
rob
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