STAY ON THE LOOKOUT FOR YOUR LOVE!
Watch out for moon, pay heed to stars,
She may be resting in your arms
And sharing life with you and love
In thoughts and sending message thus.
Snatch message quick from sweeping wind,
Watch out for chance in fleeting breeze,
This shining sun may thaw your heart,
Just look for signs in downy clouds.
Track their route from whence they come
And think of ways connecting love,
She may come soon or take some time,
If watchful you will guess it right.
She may be quick, take by surprise,
Be watchful therefore and wait for tide,
And she’ll arrive, hear breezes sigh?!
Stay on the lookout for your Love.
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
Written in a lyrical mood, some 'practical' advice for those who are looking for love.
Comments (12)
She may be quick, take by surprise... Everyone loves good surprises! Thanks for your delightful write!
How I admire those who can introduce real rhythm into their free verse, a skill which continues to elude me.
A fine write...
Best wishes
Bill
Still looking for the wonderful prise from above!
Prehaps the wind from some Georgia far away shore,
Ah ha! Who could ask for anything more!
Again, I liked your poem!
JimEee
JimEee
Something very cool