love

by RachaelC101Cork, Ireland

Sep 2009 380 Views 5 comments

love?Author: RachaelC101
Does happiness 
depend on love
only the lucky few
can possess it?
so the rest of the
unlucky are left
broken hearted?
it doesn't seem fair
that love isn't for 
everyone to share.
what or who says 
we need love
to be happy?
what or who can
stop us from
being as happy as
we can be?
what or who says
I want you to 
love me?!!
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Posted: Sep 2009

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Comments (5)

Redrose2009Tabriz, IranSep 15, 2009

Everything depends on love. Love is the motivation for every happiness. Don't agree? That's OK. Unfortunately or fortunately, love is a silent benefactor. Just inner eyes and honest feelings can appreciate it's value.
The poem suffers from schizophrenia.

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 16, 2009

I like your poems RachaelC101-we heal through our own words.Thank you for sharing

Declan83West, Sligo IrelandSep 16, 2009

i dont think happiness depends on love
but when you feel loved, you feel happy.
happiness comes from within and the happier you are the more love you have to give, why.. cos your happy :)

i like your writing

SunnnValletta, Majjistral MaltaOct 9, 2009

I say.

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 13, 2011

Hi Rachael,i could'nt agree with Declan more '' when you feel loved,you feel happy''i have a difference in oppinion though based on your beautiful write,i enjoy reading your work,thanks for sharing