I was four years big and I thought the world was in chorus just for me. ~My father told me and I believed.
It was on one of those apple-green days that my Daddy bent and kissed me on the cheek and took a sharp left right out of New Jersey and headed west for my Auntie's house to the vanishing land called 'o-high-o' though I did not calculate her in the sudden and absolute hush of the world.
Twenty years after or so when I was about a century old, immersed in my Raphael-visions freezing the world with my paints and my ink, and rescuing everyone else to feel safe; Mama once said, (more than less a hundred times) 'when your heart is thick in the handshake of Love, you may think this one's the razor-red truest but men come and go and love may escape your heart.'
'It is your children alone that become the legends of your life; Though they may tip your world high and low, they will never escape the circle of your heart. It is men that come and go.'
My mother told me and I believed. But Daddy, it was you who showed the way.
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
The things that children are told stays with them, but it is the adult's actions that can spell out the destiny of one's life.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 30, 2011
Hi Starfiregirl i enjoyed reading this,a true fact indeed thats so rampampt in Trinidad also,fathers walking out on their children which seem to play a major roll in the shape of their lives,thanks for sharing.
Hi, Journeying through this poem, that begins with ~My father told me and I believed and ends with My mother told me and I believed. But Daddy, it was you who showed the way, this reader clearly witnessed THE EVIDENCE OF GHOSTS. Oh, my, the message...this one's the razor-red truest! Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Journeying through this poem, that begins with ~My father told me and I believed and ends with My mother told me and I believed. But Daddy, it was you who showed the way, this reader clearly witnessed THE EVIDENCE OF GHOSTS. Oh, my, the message...this one's the razor-red truest! Thanks for sharing it with us.