THE EVIDENCE OF GHOSTS

THE EVIDENCE OF GHOSTS

I was four years big
and I thought the world was in chorus
just for me.
~My father told me
and I believed.

It was on one of those apple-green days
that my Daddy bent and kissed me on the cheek
and took a sharp left
right out of New Jersey
and headed west for my Auntie's house
to the vanishing land called 'o-high-o'
though I did not calculate her
in the sudden and absolute
hush of the world.

Twenty years after or so
when I was about a century old,
immersed in my Raphael-visions
freezing the world with my paints and my ink,
and rescuing everyone else to feel safe;
Mama once said,
(more than less a hundred times)
'when your heart is thick in the handshake
of Love, you may think
this one's the razor-red truest
but men come and go
and love may escape your heart.'

'It is your children alone
that become the legends of your life;
Though they may tip your world high and low,
they will never
escape the circle of your heart.
It is men that come and go.'

My mother told me
and I believed.
But Daddy, it was you
who showed the way.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
The things that children are told stays with them, but it is the adult's actions that can spell out the destiny of one's life.

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Poetnumber1
Hi Starfiregirl i enjoyed reading this,a true fact indeed thats so rampampt in Trinidad also,fathers walking out on their children which seem to play a major roll in the shape of their lives,thanks for sharing.handshake
jazzy75
Love the different perspectives and corresponding language....this poem is deep and embedded in the psyche. Brilliant write.cool
starfire_girl
I am honored to recieve such high salutations from two such gifted writers! Many blessings!
lorentz
raphael vision ? do you have a link with anthroposophy ,or steiner pedagogy ?
gnj4u
Hi,
Journeying through this poem, that begins with ~My father told me and I believed and ends with My mother told me and I believed. But Daddy, it was you who showed the way, this reader clearly witnessed THE EVIDENCE OF GHOSTS. Oh, my, the message...this one's the razor-red truest! Thanks for sharing it with us.
starfire_girl
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