There you lie on the ground A single feather to be found A clue for all to expound A creature on wings southbound What caused you to be unbound From all others that surround To end up here earthbound And no others around A query that's so dumfound Be confused with the profound Just maybe you are homebound Or maybe it is I who confound All that really is profound?
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaSep 2, 2011
Hi Yankee,
Well I think your rhyme is very sound. Not easy to do and get sense out of it. You have shown some real poetic/rhmying skill here.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 2, 2011
There you lie on the ground A single feather to be found A clue for all to expound A creature on wings southbound What caused you to be unbound From all others that surround To end up here earthbound And no others around A query that's so dumfound Be confused with the profound Just maybe you are homebound Or maybe it is I who confound All that really is profound?
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Well I think your rhyme is very sound. Not easy to do and get sense out of it. You have shown some real poetic/rhmying skill here.
A single feather to be found
A clue for all to expound
A creature on wings southbound
What caused you to be unbound
From all others that surround
To end up here earthbound
And no others around
A query that's so dumfound
Be confused with the profound
Just maybe you are homebound
Or maybe it is I who confound
All that really is profound?
Beautiful poem.
I like this :)
such talent