Already is still dark And almost sunrise Alarm rings to warn me Descend into the mines Shake loose some salt Deep inside the earth Of my middle class world Drudgery of modern life Lifted by unquenchable thirst For good literature and wine Untangle my free time Free my simple agrarian mind Learn the meaning of rest Taste the fruits of idleness Where is the sanctity of pleasure When dreams board a runaway train Travelling too fast Out of control Jump off and roll away No! Fear says "Hang on" Or face the consequences The tender truth awaits So sinks another sunset Its glow reaches my soul Will I too be pulled down Will my spirit sink Into the night of tired dispair Where escape is out of reach From reality....but whose reality?
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
Self reflection into a busy life...and a search for its meaning.
I have wrote on the same thing .. at times life is so busy,, people do not notice the beauty that surrounds us..
Nice reflection.. enjoy the weekend...
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 4, 2011
A thoughtful write and yet a proking question for an ever more busy society which barely have time to enjoy the beautiful things of life,lovely write my friend
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 4, 2011
Taste the fruits of idleness Where is the sanctity of pleasure
Love it.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 4, 2011
Hi Yankee
You develop introspection to an art form with this compelling write...
Thanks for all your comments....Fells...the older I get the more I fear lack of accomplishment in my life and the harder I try to make up for lost time...it's insane.....especially when I look back at the folly of a youth spent wasting lots of time unproductively but blissfully ignorent of its consequences.
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I think too often we are just so involved in work and other things, we just don't take time to sit back and rest and reflect.
Nicely put.
Nice reflection.. enjoy the weekend...
Where is the sanctity of pleasure
Love it.
You develop introspection to an art form with this compelling write...
Enjoyed the read
Best wishes
Bill