ANGUISH!

Lend me your eyes so I can see
The reason you chose him over me
Lend me his ears to hear your voice
Why you chose him made me second choice
Lend me his heart does mine not beat
His must be whole and mine incomplete

Lend me his smile should I just run
I must be boring and he's too fun
Lend me his lips to feel your skin
It hurts to lose when he always wins
Lend me his hands to feel your touch
It must be love and not just a crush

Lend me his time he spends with you
So I can smile when I'm with you
Lend me his tears so you can see
How much you would have meant to me
Lend me his gifts that you both share
I'd give you mine if I was there

Lend me his mind that captured you
Will he write kind words like I do
Lend me his age he's young I see
Now I know why you're afraid of me
Lend me his life just to be with you
So you can see what I am going through!
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
THIS IS MY TAKE,MY EMOTIONAL MELTDOWN,WHEN A GIRL YOU REALLY FALL IN LOVE WITH..CHOOSES SOMEONE ELSE (OVER YOU) I NEVER FELT PAIN AND ANGUISH LIKE THIS BEFORE...SHE MAY HAVE HER REASONS,BUT I WOULD LIKE HER TO STEP INTO MY EYES.

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Poetnumber1
Love the lyrics,its original and i love the flare to it,poignant write my friend,awesomeapplause applause applause applause
dreamwolf5264
yeah! poet number 1 i've read your poems,and i know you've been there before...they call us emo guys,but we can express ourselves better than anyone!!!peace handshake beer
fjamesj9701
Great lyrics has a Brandon Heath melody which is awesome and doesnt take away from this at all. cheers
dreamwolf5264
fjames9701...thanks for your comment,this was a raw write of mine,when a girl you love,decides to leave you,and get engaged to someone else.....its more than a slap in the face..its a stab through the heart!dunno
dreamwolf5264
i was going to post this on her f.b. page....but i'm not sure what her reaction would be.yay devil
country_lady67
comfort hug Its very beautiful and maybe if you knew what was in your heart it may have had a different outcome... but then perhaps not.. so sorry for your pain..
Billiegirl
Oh my god how touching is that
will remember this on for long time
great write
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Odette67
Very sad poem... these things happen though and it hurts like hell...I have been hurt and I have hurt a man very badly too.teddybear
dreamwolf5264
billiegirl and odette67..thanks for your support,i think poets and song writers write there best and darkest thoughts when in this state of mind,i think most would agree.teddybear hug peace
Poetnumber1
Hi again my friend,i think once one masters the art of lyrics and combines that with strong metaphors,the effect it gives is soothing and a most potent sophisticated write,again a truly remarkable piece where lyrics and metorphoric use are entwined,awesomeyay applause applause
dreamwolf5264
hi poet#1 i listen to so much music,that it actually effects the way i write,though i love the free verse way of writing,my heart is set on lyrics and rhyming,it comes naturally to me,thanks again,and i'll see what else i can come up with. handshake cheers peace
madtat29
This ones real good dreamwolf...drinking
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