Night

marina1000

by marina1000Queensland, Australia

Sep 2011 1,098 Views 19 comments

The Night

Author: marina1000

Do you dream dreams hidden within
Does the night whisper to you tales of satin
Like a velvet enshrouding your skin
You wonder if another can hear your voice in the silence
If only but a moment you can connect in the resonance
A heart meeting another in the time distance

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Posted: Sep 2011

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Comments (19)

agoodguy2have

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USASep 18, 2011

marina, this short piece of aaabbb is a lovely smooth read. ;-)

marina1000

marina1000OPQueensland, AustraliaSep 18, 2011

Thank you goody

Poetnumber1

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 18, 2011

Hi Marina,short and sweet,thanks for sharing this with us,hope to read more from you

marina1000

marina1000OPQueensland, AustraliaSep 18, 2011

Thank you poet....your poems are great as well!

marikia

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaSep 19, 2011

Hi Marina, a very imaginative poem, with questions addressed to the one who could "connect in the resonance" with your heart, respond to your call from distance. This is a remarkable debut here, so welcome to this corner! Good luck to you!

marina1000

marina1000OPQueensland, AustraliaSep 19, 2011

Thank you so much Marikia for your warm welcome and comments. I enjoy reading your deep poems!!

MizzySwan

MizzySwanunknown, Jakarta IndonesiaSep 19, 2011

Hi

Your poem is both sweet and romantic

Ayhra

AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 19, 2011

"hear your voice in the silence" :) I love it Marina!!!

Earlgreytea

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusSep 19, 2011

very beautiful and elegant words..., and a lovely message...

marina1000

marina1000OPQueensland, AustraliaSep 19, 2011

Hi Mizzy....thank you for your lovely comments, much appreciated!

marina1000

marina1000OPQueensland, AustraliaSep 19, 2011

Hi Ayhra...thank you very much...I enjoy reading your moving poems as well!!!

marina1000

marina1000OPQueensland, AustraliaSep 19, 2011

Hi Earlgreytea, I'm glad you liked it..your poems are great read as well!

pilgrimageoflove

pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaSep 20, 2011

"If only but a moment you can connect in the resonance"
I love this line
welcome

marina1000

marina1000OPQueensland, AustraliaSep 20, 2011

Pilgrim, I'm glad you like it, thank you!!

steve1223

steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 23, 2011

Do you dream dreams hidden within

With that line you started a very smooth write...look forward to reading more

marina1000

marina1000OPQueensland, AustraliaSep 23, 2011

Thank you Steve!

lorentz

lorentzhalifax, Nova Scotia CanadaSep 23, 2011

it sounds like the wonderful"night in white satin"..
your musical words are chanting like a sensual mantra

itchywitch

itchywitchgalway, Galway IrelandSep 23, 2011

beautiful marina, love the line voice in the silence

marina1000

marina1000OPQueensland, AustraliaSep 23, 2011

Thank you Lorentz and itchy.....its humbling to be among talented poets as yourselves

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