There are times when I need you And feel I can't go on There are times when I miss you But time slips on and on But time doesn't erase That you left me behind I thought you were different I thought you were kind
Trickery treachery anguish despair You were so different Now I see you don't care Hurting is hurting So why can't you see I'm human like you But you refuse to believe
You left me behind You left me to waste You left me alone In this cold empty space These pins and these needles I shout but no sound My legs grow so numb As I fall to the ground
Stains on my carpet stains on my brain You're the stain that left me But your soul still remains My dreams are all broken By the life you've destroyed My hurt and my anger These sick games you enjoy
Tears on my pillow tears fill my bed Like a dark angry ocean You drown me instead Growing so tired growing so old With one look in the mirror I've lost all my control
My mind is on fire I hurt everywhere Paybacks a b*tch I'll find you I swear! You tore me to pieces But that is okay It will never be over Cause its Me you betray
Empty so empty one emotion away I don't care anymore I just want them to pay They can't feel my hurt They can't feel my pain But when this is over So is this game!
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
even know there long gone,and out of your life....these thoughts i write,i know still exsist in your mind,its human nature.
There is much anguish in this poem...I always think men feel more pain when love dies.
dreamwolf5264OPfrancestown, New Hampshire USASep 23, 2011
hi again odette,thanks for passing through..i'm not sure we all take it the same,for me writing about this subject is part of my passion i have,when you truely love someone...i never forget thigs easily.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 24, 2011
Hi Dreamwolf, you seem to master anguish so well,i'm not so brilliant at the anguish part,but i'm guessing that when a heart is hurt,deeply intrenched things come out,that you never thought possible,a brilliant write my friend,just awesome ...PN1
dreamwolf5264OPfrancestown, New Hampshire USASep 24, 2011
hello pn#1 yeah i guess you can say i have this down well,i hope to someday write more positive things...maybe when i find her,and she shows me a whole different world..until then i will try to write more upbeat things,..thanks again!
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you seem to master anguish so well,i'm not so brilliant at the anguish part,but i'm guessing that when a heart is hurt,deeply intrenched things come out,that you never thought possible,a brilliant write my friend,just awesome ...PN1