Follow me my footsteps for awhile Notice only one set of tracks My path going over many a mile Here and there many cutbacks Waiting for something worthwhile Meteors perhaps waiting impacts How long must my heart be sessile And my love still frozen in rocks Every thought of you brings a new smile All across my face causing cracks When my thoughts of you so compile Bringing all to life what it lacks
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
Thinking about how liberating love it..breaking us loose like emerging from a rock......or out of a shell.....
Comments (3)
This rhyming style is not easy to sustain throughout a 12 line stanza, but you have carried it off with elan... Enjoyed the read.
Regards
Bill
Notice only one set of tracks
This poem reminded me of the poem "Footsteps" Lovely poem.