why worry

by jimmydean69Kingaroy, Queensland, Australia

Oct 2011 713 Views 2 comments

why worry

Why worry when all hope is gone,
Why worry when your heart is ripped and torn,
Why care when your every thought is to mourn,
Why listen to people who do not care,
why take advice when your afraid to care,
Why love when there's no more to share,
Why live when your almost dead,
Why do I have these thoughts in my head,
Because I won't leave I won't fade I think I will just relax in the shade,
IM TIRED!!...

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Posted: Oct 2011

Comments (2)

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAOct 9, 2011

"Why Worry?".... A great title for a poem that could be written a thousand different ways!!! A suggestion for you.... although the colors you've selected for your poem are both very nice colors, the red text against the blue background is very hard to read! Try toning down one of the two colors and the poem will become easier to read.
Thanks for sharing your poem!! Let's see some more!