i sit there in 'our' corner, at your favourite eating place. know the menu quite in detail, and i try not to retrace.
how i miss you badly sweetheart, it’s a fact i can't ignore. and everytime i close my eyes, it just hits me more and more.
no that's not quite correctly put, 'cause i see you everywhere. everytime i try to move on, l do feel i cannot dare.
the good die young i hear them say, oh how cruel can life be. but then again, life is so short can you please wait up for me.
i talk about you everyday, as if you are still around. but i know where you are, ay? my heart's with you in the ground.
how i wish i was more jolly, and am writing funny prose, but reality is morbid so with this line i will close.
tell your loved ones that you love them, do not wait for a tomorrow. be they near or far away it’s the way to soothe the sorrow.
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
I felt like writing in this mood at the time. Maybe it says words which others might find difficult to express...and anyway life is a lot of everything. hugs all.
poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaNov 5, 2009
really very beautiful thought ,i understand what u mean ,it is deep really ,but sometimes it is better u hide ur love inside u cause u will get refuse and ignore if u said it ,for this it is better u hide inside u better than getting hurt and disappointed ,thanks for ur meaningful share ,it touches me very well
you know when something means something? when those hairs on the back of your neck to stand up.... very nice... their isn't alot of stuff that i like, so whyen i see something i must post a comment.....
Comments (16)
True a sad poem, but the last stanza is good advice to the world... Never give up!
rob