Lightning crashes

Walking alone in the dark countless shadows pass me by I can’t see their faces but I hear their cry. We’re all looking for love but afraid to try. I close my eyes and raise my hands to the sky. I ask god why but I get no reply. I fall to ground and begin to cry lightning crashes and I’m forced to open my eyes. I’m left breathless by the angel descending from the sky. I rise from the ground with no sound in this darkness I’m found. Lightning crashes and my eyes are filled with her beauty and I’m no longer what I used to be. Long lost feelings come alive in her arms I’m a new me. I’m finally free to begin again. I can feel my stomach tightening, we kiss and all that’s left is lightning.
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Posted: Oct 2011

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swade777
A POWERFUL picture you paint with these romantic words!!! That's a kiss to never forget!!!
Ayhra
Very nice to read. Thank you for sharing this armyman handshake bouquet
armyman228
Thank you all for reading and giving feedback I hope it painted a picture in your mind I look forward to hearing more feedback and I'm always grateful to all who take the time to read my work
armyman228
It's kinda cheesy but I think I might have been falling in love when I wrote this it kinda describes that feeling you have when your relationship has just ended and you feel so alone and it transitions into when you find new love and your rediscovering emotions you had locked away.
rapturecapture
Hi armyman


Beautiful read...
Stunning words of forgiveness and hope...
Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughtshug angel wave
armyman228
Thank you very much for reading I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
fjamesj9701
Good stuff, powerful ...jesse
armyman228
thank you very much
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