I wonder what to do I wonder where to go I wander the earth searching What am I searching for? If only I knew? If only I had a clue? I only know there is more More meaning, more inspiration, More purpose, more emotion, more joy, more me... More of the elusive you! More thoughts of what should be. I see a flower with petals ...but I want to see a bouquet I see a hummingbird and it is colourful....but I want to see A flock of birds bursting with life I see a mountain stream and it has fish...but I want to see a waterfall With a beautiful pristine lake below I see what I see....but it still isn't me I need to see it thru another's eyes too I need to see it in ....in double stereo ... Thru 4 eyes at once...thru a soul I am bonded to...to A soul I can emphasize with...thru an understanding without words This is the missing part of me that only lets me see in two dimensions I need that other essence to see in three D...to live life in Three D, to experience all that one can...but with the Allegiance, loyalty and joy and inspiration of a like heart That is .....living.....loving....not just being!!
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Posted: Oct 2011
About this poem:
Life seems much more vivid sharing it with someone with a similar intellect, appreciation and intensity. Need to tidy this prose up a bit but sometimes it looses its sincerety and spontaneity when that is done.
I wouldn't tidy it up boyschrme it is perfect! wonderfully written. beautifully expressed as always!
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKOct 29, 2011
Hi Boys
This is a first class write from beginning to end... we all seek the rainbow's end, but so rarely find it...
Best wishes
Bill
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ArteeeChristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandOct 29, 2011
Nature and all its beauty... Beautiful write very inspiring! thank you boyshchrm for sharing...
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 1, 2011
Nice writing Boysch. I agree, one can be happy by itself, but plennitude comes from the hand of two.
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKNov 1, 2011
No need to change a thing with this beautiful write Boyshchrm.. The words came from the soul..from where it flows & counts.. Thankyou for sharing this with us...
thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandNov 1, 2011
Yes dear poet, your To wander poem is really wonderful. Enjoyed, thanks for sharing.
vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaNov 1, 2011
I know, exactly, what you mean. These thoughts of yours are so true for me as if you have taken them from my mind. Do whatever you want to make your poetical expression look more agreeable to you, but the essence is so deep and adequate. Thanks for talking about it.
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKNov 1, 2011
To wander Author:boyshchrm Thankyou your sincerety and spontaneity its so refreshing.. "I only know there is more More meaning, more inspiration, More purpose, more emotion, more joy, more me...
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USANov 1, 2011
Boyshchrm, I so enjoyed reading your poem. I think it is perfect the way it is. Very nice indeed. Take care. Blessings.
Comments (16)
This is a first class write from beginning to end... we all seek the rainbow's end, but so rarely find it...
Best wishes
Bill
The words came from the soul..from where it flows & counts..
Thankyou for sharing this with us...
Thankyou your sincerety and spontaneity its so refreshing..
"I only know there is more
More meaning, more inspiration,
More purpose, more emotion,
more joy, more me...
I so enjoyed reading your poem. I think it is perfect the way it is. Very nice indeed. Take care. Blessings.
work...lol.
is not gold...or real...or lasting..
plenitude and yes two can make an adequate
sufficiency...lol.