Walking hand and hand by the shoreline Cool water barely touching Sand sticking to your feet and mine But not caring one lick of the clinging Clear sky revealing shimmering, glinting stars Like petite diamonds beyond our reach No thought of hurried city life nor speeding cars Hands glued entwined on this lonely beach When we talk we need only look into eachs eyes A knowing squeeze as clear as blind reading braille We walked all night no bother our location under shimmering skies For the stars made us appear as standing still even in this gale Lost in the recesses of our passionate thoughts Not even acknowleging the cool autumn air Sand dunes, rocky edge, waters sheen, reflecting moonbeams, distant yachts How much more could we love and care So carefree without any fears A feeling so special.....so very rare Dwindling time together, every moment prescious....now anxious as morning nears We turn to each other and stare Our gaze then becomes a knowing smile We walk in the opposite direction.... intent on turning back the dial
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
Some moments seem so special you never want them to end.
It made me loney and long for this experience.... but I did love the poem...
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USANov 7, 2011
Beautiful poem. Loved it. I too long to have an experience like yours.
thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandNov 7, 2011
Enjoyed this poem, beautifully written, lovely images. Wonderful Boycharm!!
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKNov 7, 2011
By the Shoreline Author: boyshchrm beautiful gentle write - like the lines blow : "So carefree without any fears "A feeling so special.....so very rare
Comments (18)
times in our lives seem pretty
rare. Thanks.
your black stetson friend.
How something like this can take one back to happy times plus bring a tear
Dwindling time together, every moment prescious....
It was all very innocent....lol. Thanks for your
comments
Your powerful use of the present participle gives this poem great immediacy. Beautifully expressed.
Author: boyshchrm
beautiful gentle write - like the lines blow :
"So carefree without any fears
"A feeling so special.....so very rare
Didn't mean to make you cry.
At PC we all share.
Yes immedecy.
Thanks for sharinf
Exceptional!
Nice that you have a romantic side tho.
Thanks for commenting.