Raging waters crashing into our hull Where we cross the turbulent streams Sometimes our horror runs so deep Roiling currents that push and pull Waking us from our slumbering dreams Hearing strange noises from the deep Ever watchful eye of a blackhooded gull Fearful our ship falling apart at the seams Horrible creatures across the bottom creep Eiry glows a green crumbling skull Coming from a sunken cavern of screams Lost in a world that will never sleep
A lot of insomnia I would say Yankee, but a fun and scary read.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoNov 17, 2011
Hi my friend,i still have that alot,so you're not alone I enjoyed the write,just passing through M.M
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 17, 2011
Raging waters crashing into our hull Where we cross the turbulent streams Sometimes our horror runs so deep Roiling currents that push and pull Waking us from our slumbering dreams
It is amazing what comes into ones mind in the early hours..I would have had nightmares after writing this..nice one yankee
rarecardGreen Point, New South Wales AustraliaNov 22, 2011
Very Descriptive, I Feel As Though Im There
Thankyou for the read Yankee4you
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AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 22, 2011
Nice and different writing Yankee4u. Thank you for sharing this
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Yankee, but a fun and scary read.
Where we cross the turbulent streams
Sometimes our horror runs so deep
Roiling currents that push and pull
Waking us from our slumbering dreams
It is amazing what comes into ones mind in the early hours..I would have had nightmares after writing this..nice one yankee
Thankyou for the read Yankee4you
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