A facebook message, from thirty years ago emotions and thoughts in a whirlwind exposed some of them happy, yet they all should be froze.
I'm a very private person, I'm sure you all know yet this recent encounter I want to expose this part of my past was locked under key its been three days now, as the rust drips away.
My mind in the back wants to attack yet my mind in the front wants to forgive as that rust drips away to loosen that lock of a time I once knew, my hurt kept in mock.
Tho I read and I listen to words that are said I look to my life and see its just what it is a distant smile comes over the words she's not really asking, but her question have I heard!
The roof that we shared, was a long time ago shingles are old and with nails exposed tar spots cover the leaks when it rains some water seeps in, most of it drains.
I thought I forgave her a long time ago in the way was the rust no drip for the flow I was wrong as I hid her in my far distant past a first love that was real, did not stay, could not last~
hello Andrew, it was tough back in the day, now its all in where it is, and that's ok. ty my friend,
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 24, 2011
Nice to read Bentlee. Thank you for sharing this
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKNov 24, 2011
~Knockin at my back door~ by: Bentlee thankyou for sharing your very poignant journey a hard treck wonderful write I thought I forgave her a long time ago in the way was the rust no drip for the flow I was wrong as I hid her in my far distant past a first love that was real, did not stay, could not last~
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by: Bentlee
thankyou for sharing your very poignant journey a hard treck
wonderful write
I thought I forgave her a long time ago
in the way was the rust no drip for the flow
I was wrong as I hid her in my far distant past
a first love that was real, did not stay, could not last~
perfecto bentlee