i weeped ageless

by surprizemenew orleans, Louisiana, USA

Jun 2009 985 Views 4 comments

i weeped ageless

Author: surprizeme

i weeped ageless
in the night street

grabbed by branches
bare winter's feast

ice stiff birches
exploded upwardly

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Posted: Jun 2009

About this poem:

Dedicated to my mom who died unexpectedly on April 27th 2009

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Comments (4)

courageMorgantown, West Virginia USAJun 15, 2009

Your poem is definately unique. I like your style of writing. Let me be the first to say, I am sorry for you loss. It is such a good thing of you to do, dedicating this to your mother. I am sure she is proud of you. Keep up the writting! Love to see more. People here are kind and caring. I am pleased that you chose to share this with us. Thank you. Take care. You will be in my prayers. God Bless. Peace and Hugs!

Atheists9086Austin, Texas USAJun 15, 2009

Beautiful.

I know words make no difference. What was done, is done. But I'm very sorry.

bakereightLexington, Kentucky USAJun 18, 2009

Emotionally beautiful...Thanks for sharing

beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 3, 2015

this was and is a beautiful expression of your experience!

tho long ago now, thanks for sharing this on the passage of your mother