Like a grumpy fish Fanning my fins slowly Going nowhere in my tank Nose pressed against glass In water that never swirls Except to stir the gravel Suck out my wasted life Are you happy now? My watery cage is clean Why don’t you set me free? You with your disgusting Bulging blue eyes and shiny teeth Stop looking at me Annoying taps on my wall Of my artificial world Is it night now? Watched under a neon light While you rest and smile I want to bite you
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Posted: Dec 2011
About this poem:
Really hating aquariums written from a fish's perspective I suppose
Comments (8)
extremely well Yankee4.
A great poem...either frivolous or metaphorical but nicely done.
Trapped In water that never swirls..."metaphorical", indeed! Brought back images from "Finding Nemo", too. Enjoyed the read.