PAIN

(“Once could the Morn’s first beams, the healthful breeze,
All Nature charm, and gay was every hour: - But ah!..”
“Pain” by S. T. Coleridge)

If you can still partake of, feel the breeze
Which brings in waves the freshness of the air,
And find within yourself a joy that lingers there,
No stranger yet to youth you are at least.

But when the pain inside your soul assails
And in your eyes life’s color gets so dim,
Each stressful night makes any prospect grim,
Now that you’re old, tell, what’s the point of wait?

You sound less joyful, no more zest, no fire,
No friends, whose company adorned much younger days,
They're gone, only a few of them remain,
No love is left, just poetry to kindle soul with lyre.

So what’s to gain by waiting through the nights?!
There's neither joy in olden age, nor much delight!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2011
About this poem:
While looking for S. T. Coleridge’s “The Rime of Ancient Mariner” at Macduff’s kind suggestion I came across “Pain” by the same author, which touched my soul due to its relevance to whatever old age refers to. The poem I wrote was inspired by “Pain” by S. T. Coleridge.

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Comments (2)

cafetwo2010
I suppose this might be a painful inspiration dear. angel teddybear
Happygolucky4u
Sad but nicely written. wave
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