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My Red Rose

I watched you ..while you're picking up
The Red Rose I put , into your car glass
I watched you ,wondering and looking around
I watched you from far away
While My eyes drowns again into my tears ..
I watched you smelling my rose ..
Oh I felt you breathing too ..
Wanted to hold you so ..

Im sorry , Dont you go
Dont forget that what we had
Was everything i dream for
Im sorry , forgive me
My past was the reason you let go
What Can I do more ?
How Can I live after you !
It's not easy to close your door
Knowing that you own the greatest heart of all

You May Keep my rose
Untill you know
Who really loved you so
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Posted: Jan 2012
About this poem:
True Story

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Yankee4you
This poem really touches me because I know that feeling of desperation and lost hope...when last chances were never enough and I really feel a lot of empathy for how you must have felt inside to the very core of your being....so thank you for being so sensitive and honest...sad flower
LadyMorgana60
Hello Swan wave
Such a touching write..very heartfelt.. hug
Thank you for sharing with us.wine May 2012 be happy & blessed for you.
gnj4u
Hi, Swan87,
I watched you smelling my rose .. While this image should paint a picture of great joy, in this context, it evokes much sadness at the loss.
lastwaltz
Oh Swan...you break my heart with this touching piece crying '' I send you all the love and friendship I can muster,and I hope he pricked his finger on a thorn wink innocent
teddybear bouquet
cafetwo2010
Your heart is a red rose darlin.' Love never wilts..angel kiss teddybear
Swan87
Oh My Lord blushing Big Hug To all of you hug

I wrote this poem and left it for few days , i come back to see the most beautiful and touching comments from you all my sweetest friends ..
I love your support and i know that lots of you been through even more than what i've been through ..

Love you all and kisses

Swan
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