I watched you ..while you're picking up The Red Rose I put , into your car glass I watched you ,wondering and looking around I watched you from far away While My eyes drowns again into my tears .. I watched you smelling my rose .. Oh I felt you breathing too .. Wanted to hold you so ..
Im sorry , Dont you go Dont forget that what we had Was everything i dream for Im sorry , forgive me My past was the reason you let go What Can I do more ? How Can I live after you ! It's not easy to close your door Knowing that you own the greatest heart of all
You May Keep my rose Untill you know Who really loved you so
This poem really touches me because I know that feeling of desperation and lost hope...when last chances were never enough and I really feel a lot of empathy for how you must have felt inside to the very core of your being....so thank you for being so sensitive and honest...
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKJan 8, 2012
Hello Swan Such a touching write..very heartfelt.. Thank you for sharing with us. May 2012 be happy & blessed for you.
Hi, Swan87, I watched you smelling my rose .. While this image should paint a picture of great joy, in this context, it evokes much sadness at the loss.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJan 8, 2012
Your heart is a red rose darlin.' Love never wilts..
Swan87OPSyria, QatarJan 12, 2012
Oh My Lord Big Hug To all of you
I wrote this poem and left it for few days , i come back to see the most beautiful and touching comments from you all my sweetest friends .. I love your support and i know that lots of you been through even more than what i've been through ..
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Such a touching write..very heartfelt..
Thank you for sharing with us. May 2012 be happy & blessed for you.
I watched you smelling my rose .. While this image should paint a picture of great joy, in this context, it evokes much sadness at the loss.
I wrote this poem and left it for few days , i come back to see the most beautiful and touching comments from you all my sweetest friends ..
I love your support and i know that lots of you been through even more than what i've been through ..
Love you all and kisses
Swan