You're not from this world The things that you say The words that you choose I've never met anyone That even resembles you
Your words are kind With a smile so grand Filled with fun and laughter You bring joy to all But you can't be real
What makes you tick? You're to good to be true Tell me the truth-who are you? You write beautiful poems But you seem so sad
I sense there's a problem You keep this deep within Are you waiting for her You can wait a lifetime And she'll never show
But you'll wait until the end You're not from this world You listen to no one Only that voice in your head Just to be by her side
Your loyalty is commendable She's just too far away But that wont stop you A heart longing for desire Your language is music
But you're never out of tune You just want her to notice You're the man of her dreams You feel so damn empty Everyday seems the same
But I can never give up This world really needs me Maybe the stars we see at night Are our hearts in clever disguise Each filled with brilliant light
We all have the potential So jump out of your box Put aside your fear and let them say I never met anyone quite like you You're not from this world!!!
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Posted: Jan 2012
About this poem:
a poem that really meant alot to me,written for someone very dear to me,i'm reposting this against her will,i really don't care anymore about anyone or anything(nice guys finish last)its the way this world operates!
It's ok to finish last,in fact I excel at it....but don't stop caring that's what makes you special.
dreamwolf5264OPfrancestown, New Hampshire USAJan 17, 2012
i hear you lastwaltz........every girl i've ever met,always runs away,its this fast paced world that scares them and sends them running!!!
MycallingCork, IrelandJan 17, 2012
Hi Dreamwolf. This poem is so unbelievably good and very original. Glad you did re-post it, thanks.
dordeensoaplake, Washington USAJan 17, 2012
sometimes we just run from our selves,without giving a reason,dont give up hope, im sure to maney people you are on the top,just in a way you dont realize
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 17, 2012
Loved it....and the heartfelt words just lept going, and I never slowed down my pace as I read....really beautiful.....Kathy
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKJan 30, 2012
YOU'RE NOT FROM THIS WORLD by: dreamwolf5264 But I can never give up This world really needs me Maybe the stars we see at night Are our hearts in clever disguise Each filled with brilliant light A deep emotional heart felt write thank you for sharing your thoughts[b ]dreamwolf
dreamwolf5264OPfrancestown, New Hampshire USAJan 30, 2012
thanks maxeen for your comment,i wrote this for someone special to me,its over now...i know how she feels,people are afraid...afraid to reach for someone that could make them happy for the rest of there life....just like that song from -nazareth-(love hurts)
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by: dreamwolf5264
But I can never give up
This world really needs me
Maybe the stars we see at night
Are our hearts in clever disguise
Each filled with brilliant light
A deep emotional heart felt write thank you
for sharing your thoughts[b ]dreamwolf