All This World!

For May that comes to us in year only once,
For faded dawn and slush of rainy day,
Place blame on anyone for messing up your life,
But never point at me, to you I pray.

All this world is not our invention,
No, it's not invention of mine.
All this world is not our invention,
No, it's not invention of mine.

The daily run of time is not contrivance mine,
It's bringing either joy or sorrow to us.
The world is so devised it happens all the time,
With not so much as hope to make things right.

All this world is not our invention,
No, it's not invention of mine.
All this world is not our invention,
No, it's not invention of mine.

The only thing that helps to deal with such a blight,
The only way there is in flicker of days.
It may be hard for us to scatter clouds in sky,
But our love may grow with each passing day.

All this world is not our invention,
No, it's not invention of mine.
All this world is not our invention,
No, it's not invention of mine.
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Posted: Feb 2012

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Maxeen_1
Hi Marikia (( «???? ???», )) THE WORLD
Video is wonderful thankyou so much for sharing such a beautiful song and leaving the links vialso taking the time to translate the words wonderfully..hugss poet friend teddybear gift heart wings
marikia
The only thing that helps ...,
The only way there is ...
It may be hard for us to scatter clouds in sky,
But our love may grow with each passing day.

On this optimistic note...Thank you!heart beating
godsprincessonline today!
Very sad. But I disagree with the writer of the following lines because as you well know I believe we can be forgiven of wrong doing through our Lord if we repent and ask for forgiveness. Here I go preaching again - sorry Marikia. I'm just as big a sinner as the next person.

"The world is so devised it happens all the time,
With not so much as hope to make things right."

Kathy
teddybear
marikia
Godsprincess, you've made a good point: if I were the author of the lyrics I wouldn't have placed 'hope' in such context, wouldn't have given up on hope! Thank you for your thoughtful comment! Best wishes!heart beating bouquet
marikia
Godsprincess, now that I think of it I must confess, I've made some poetic deviation from the original when translating these particular lines:

"The world is so devised it happens all the time,
With not so much as hope to make things right."


Word for word in the original:

"The world is so devised that everything is possible in it, and then nothing can be set right."

I could have chosen the following options:

"The world is so devised things happen all the time,
But then what has been done can not be undone,"

or

"The world is so devised things happen all the time,
But then the wrong that's done can not be undone."

There is no mention of 'hope' in the original, but I might have opted to deviate from the original for poetic reasons or in order to fit into music. I usually am more constrained than free when translating, but translators do deviate from time to time without damage to content. If this time the content has suffered, I am sorry.

Thank you, dear poetess, for making me think it over, kindest regards! hug bouquet
godsprincessonline today!
I wasn't being critical of your translation - sorry!

Kathy angel
marikia
But I am, and this is the point, and I thank you for it.
Kindest regards, dear poetess!heart beating
ashlander
That was refreshing,such beautiful words,music and artwork. Thank you.hug
Everything you've been posting lately makes me wish I had discovered this section
sooner,now I have to catch up.
cafetwo2010
God's greatest inventions is a heart like yours dear.
Cafe
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