Under a clear autumn sky I caught my thoughts just drifting by Not a cloud to spoil my view Just a million stars to reminded me of you Then I recalled on times gone bye That beautiful smile as you watched the sky And wondered what star could catch your eye And send your thoughts way up high To recall a night, not long gone When we made love till the early dawn
This is really good writing....just thinking about how how different we are but how much we desire the same things....
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 18, 2012
Hi LA (well I don't want to call you limited)
Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaFeb 19, 2012
A lovely poem, Lim! So clear, so beautiful, so attractive. Just like the sky with millions of stars. You took so appropriate comparison. A lost love, still hanging in our minds, still longed for - like a wonderful starry sky that we long to reach with love and awareness.
I enjoyed it, thanks.
LimitedAdditionOPCork, IrelandFeb 19, 2012
Thanks MacDuff for your comments, your poetry inspires so it a very welcome comments from you.
LimitedAdditionOPCork, IrelandFeb 19, 2012
Hi Vyoleta Thanks for your welcome comments. I appreciate them, and it will encourage me to write some more…………………………….not sure if that’s a good thing !!! lol
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Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
I enjoyed it, thanks.