What Star

Under a clear autumn sky
I caught my thoughts just drifting by
Not a cloud to spoil my view
Just a million stars to reminded me of you
Then I recalled on times gone bye
That beautiful smile as you watched the sky
And wondered what star could catch your eye
And send your thoughts way up high
To recall a night, not long gone
When we made love till the early dawn
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Posted: Feb 2012
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Yankee4you
This is really good writing....just thinking about how how different we are but how much we desire the same things....
Macduff5
Hi LA (well I don't want to call you limited)

Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing. cheers
vyoleta
A lovely poem, Lim! So clear, so beautiful, so attractive. Just like the sky with millions of stars. You took so appropriate comparison. A lost love, still hanging in our minds, still longed for - like a wonderful starry sky that we long to reach with love and awareness.

I enjoyed it, thanks.
LimitedAddition
Thanks MacDuff for your comments, your poetry inspires so it a very welcome comments from you.
LimitedAddition
Hi Vyoleta Thanks for your welcome comments. I appreciate them, and it will encourage me to write some more…………………………….not sure if that’s a good thing !!! lol

rolling on the floor laughing
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