Do not be fooled by this silly fool’s grin How my day went don’t know where to begin Like hiding how hopeless I feel within Please pour me a glass of tonic and gin
Unfold my cramped arms from across my chest Been all day since I took a real deep breath Work shakes me up get all fizzy when stressed Sometimes my life is like dancing with death
At last I cross through the portal of home It’s time to check my baggage at the door Always good to hear a hearty ‘welcome’ Such simple greeting is hard to ignore
Not keeping apart two worlds is a sin Where one leaves off let another begin
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
Exercising that balance between work and home is a daily ritual for most of us.....this poem relfects on that.
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKFeb 17, 2012
Living In Two Worlds color=blue]Do not be fooled by this silly fool’s grin How my day went don’t know where to begin Like hiding how hopeless I feel within Not keeping apart two worlds is a sin Where one leaves off let another begin Living in two worlds...poignant write... Thanks yankee I really enjoyed reading your poem hugss
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 17, 2012
Hi Yankee,
A very well written sonnet with ideas I can certainly identify with.
solongMalta, Majjistral MaltaFeb 18, 2012
wow.........
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 18, 2012
Hi Yankee
For some time now sonnets have been my poetic genre of choice, I just enjoy both reading and writing them: Here you have written quite beautifully with the added bonus of a real good story.
Bill...I am getting into 'sonnet form' writing now and think of it as an extension ...but am mindful of my own style too to tell a story with everything being connected....which I notice is something Shakespeare does repeatedly in his sonnets...so does my form fit this style better or does this style fit my form?? curious observation....
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAFeb 20, 2012
Yankee4you "please pour me a glass of tonic and gin" Well said Yankee, I definitely want to join you there when the day is done. It is such a relief sometimes..Well expressed and thanks for sharing..
this is a great poem i was searching for the rosecross ritual and it brought me here.so weird.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 11, 2012
Do not be fooled by this silly fool’s grin How my day went don’t know where to begin Like hiding how hopeless I feel within Please pour me a glass of tonic and gin Fantastic Sonnet Yankee...How often we grin just to hide from the world the sadness within.
A good hearty welcome always warms the heart So that the cold mind could finally rest awhile It's interesting that how warmth touches the heart and how the cold escape from the mind
Comments (12)
color=blue]Do not be fooled by this silly fool’s grin
How my day went don’t know where to begin
Like hiding how hopeless I feel within
Not keeping apart two worlds is a sin
Where one leaves off let another begin
Living in two worlds...poignant write... Thanks yankee
I really enjoyed reading your poem hugss
A very well written sonnet with ideas I can certainly identify with.
For some time now sonnets have been my poetic genre of choice, I just enjoy both reading and writing them: Here you have written quite beautifully with the added bonus of a real good story.
Best wishes
Bill
How my day went don’t know where to begin
Like hiding how hopeless I feel within
Please pour me a glass of tonic and gin
Fantastic Sonnet Yankee...How often we grin just to hide from the world the sadness within.
It all lies within the minds
The commitment we all make to our sum of choices
Subjectively or objectively
So that the cold mind could finally rest awhile
It's interesting that how warmth touches the heart
and how the cold escape from the mind
Have a creative day!