Living In Two Worlds

Do not be fooled by this silly fool’s grin
How my day went don’t know where to begin
Like hiding how hopeless I feel within
Please pour me a glass of tonic and gin

Unfold my cramped arms from across my chest
Been all day since I took a real deep breath
Work shakes me up get all fizzy when stressed
Sometimes my life is like dancing with death

At last I cross through the portal of home
It’s time to check my baggage at the door
Always good to hear a hearty ‘welcome’
Such simple greeting is hard to ignore

Not keeping apart two worlds is a sin
Where one leaves off let another begin
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
Exercising that balance between work and home is a daily ritual for most of us.....this poem relfects on that.

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lucy1777
wine Very well done Yankeehandshake
Maxeen_1
Living In Two Worlds
color=blue]Do not be fooled by this silly fool’s grin
How my day went don’t know where to begin
Like hiding how hopeless I feel within
Not keeping apart two worlds is a sin
Where one leaves off let another begin

Living in two worlds...poignant write... Thanks yankee
I really enjoyed reading your poem hugss gift thumbs up hug
Macduff5
Hi Yankee,

A very well written sonnet with ideas I can certainly identify with. cheers
solong
wow.........
Fellsman
Hi Yankee

For some time now sonnets have been my poetic genre of choice, I just enjoy both reading and writing them: Here you have written quite beautifully with the added bonus of a real good story.

Best wishes

Bill wine wine
Yankee4you
Bill...I am getting into 'sonnet form' writing now and think of it as an extension ...but am mindful of my own style too to tell a story with everything being connected....which I notice is something Shakespeare does repeatedly in his sonnets...so does my form fit this style better or does this style fit my form?? curious observation....
windyweatherly
Yankee4you "please pour me a glass of tonic and gin" Well said Yankee, I definitely want to join you there when the day is done. It is such a relief sometimes..Well expressed and thanks for sharing..teddybear
adjhe
This is so true. Most people now take there work home with them and the two collide. Nice job keep it up.
blueberry7
this is a great poem i was searching for the rosecross ritual and it brought me here.so weird.angel
Odette67
Do not be fooled by this silly fool’s grin
How my day went don’t know where to begin
Like hiding how hopeless I feel within
Please pour me a glass of tonic and gin

Fantastic Sonnet Yankee...How often we grin just to hide from the world the sadness within. hug purple heart
soulgoddess
A faint grin won't fool the intuitive
It all lies within the minds
The commitment we all make to our sum of choices
Subjectively or objectively
soulgoddess
A good hearty welcome always warms the heart
So that the cold mind could finally rest awhile
It's interesting that how warmth touches the heart
and how the cold escape from the mind

Have a creative day!
heart wings
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