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Feb 2012 703 Views 17 comments

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Author: Unknown

I wear shades to hide my look
I wear dress to hide my body
I wear smile to hide my pain
I wear life to hide my death

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Posted: Feb 2012

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paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandFeb 18, 2012

windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAFeb 18, 2012

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 18, 2012

Hi Solong,

This is really a clever poem...very succinctly put.

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaFeb 19, 2012

Very strong and convincing for its brief clearness. Like an undeniable statement. Bravo! Best wishes to you.

solongOPMalta, Majjistral MaltaFeb 19, 2012

Thank you, Paloma

niah9Auckland, New ZealandFeb 19, 2012

beautifully said.....

Kathy

poppyredsydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 20, 2012

Wow!!!.I like it::daisy:

steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaFeb 20, 2012

online today!

Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USAFeb 20, 2012

Very quaint and interesting write....love the last line.....I wear life to hide my death....that's rich!!

OndosSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMar 30, 2012

Interesting perspective...
Why hide? From whom? What's the point?

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAMar 30, 2012

Well Miss Solong.... it would be a shame to hide any of the terrific features that you've been blessed to share with those around you!! Now the 'PAIN' - that part, I can understand and relate to very well! But those eyes and that beautiful frame and all the other beautiful qualities that I'm sure you possess .... don't hide those!!