Fields of White

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Sep 2009 810 Views 14 comments

~Fields of White ~

Speckled white air with purity laid ground release of the sky drifts all abound, fields of blown dunes white laden bows, twinkled sunlight reflected a flake at a time, horizontal ride in the wind where they hide from the ground till they fall, light white stroke tipped trees bear no leaves jus mound snow pristine in sight, natures tracks in the snow cross the field to the trees winters close by . . a new season to be~

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Posted: Sep 2009

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Comments (14)

jazzy75Houston, Texas USASep 29, 2009

bentlee...beautifully expressed!

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 29, 2009

A beautiful picture you've painted there with your words Bentlee.Thank you for sharing

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 29, 2009

thankyou bentlee, like this one.....new snow....love it...the kid in me, I think.......andrew....

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaSep 29, 2009

u draw the nature in sweet words , thanks for u , as always beautiful ideas u have

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 29, 2009

Jazzy ty as I'm glad you enjoyed, as I enjoyed writin it as well :)

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 29, 2009

Ty Gypsy as I'm sure there's not alot a winter in your parts. My pleasure an happy you enjoyed:)

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 30, 2009

Lol Andrew, it's definately the kid in you still jus as we all have in us. lol ty for your thoughts.

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 1, 2009

I like writin about nature Khaled as it's peaceful an so many things that can be written about too. Ty for your thoughts an comment:)

sshoreHyderabad, Telangana IndiaOct 13, 2009

thankyou i am so happy i read this it release my spirit bless you!!

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 14, 2009

Ty sshore yes an element of peace in this, ty for your comment an glad you enjoyed the read :)

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainOct 14, 2009

I love the purity of an untouched landscape, it makes you feel you are the only person in the world, not sad, but with admiration for it
You put this across beautifully
Rob

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 14, 2009

I like your comment Rob well put an ty for your thoughts an compliment:)

RedexNorthumberland, England UKMay 30, 2017

Another inspiring poem Bentlea beautifully written and leaves a peaceful place in my heart

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaMay 30, 2017

Ty my dear friend Red, what a sweetheart you are, perhaps it was over a morning tea you chose to read this one, Cheers sweetie, and ty for your reply as well as I'm happy to have been able to bring that moment to you.