Like a bright glowing ember ever flew Hit my heart and started a fire burning So there would be no getting over you Such as me only a fool needs learning
I can’t believe some dreams I never knew For all they’d do keeps me sadly yearning For only such a heart that feels so blue Harden as stone on a cold day turning
Love can only promise what it can’t keep Always leaving my consciousness churning Then many a nights when there is no sleep A phantom spirit that keeps returning
Spare no love that can never go away That leaves me alone to turn old and gray
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
This is poetry coming out of nowhere and not really meant to be sad for no reason since i'm only thinking how so much like 'life' is 'love'.....where there's always a 'beginning' and an 'end'.
Nice one coming from you for a change Yankee,yep on sleepless nights the phantoms return.
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKFeb 21, 2012
Love’s Glowing Ember by: Yankee4you Like a bright glowing ember ever flew Hit my heart and started a fire burning So there would be no getting over you uch as me only a fool needs learning Thank-you for sharing a heart felt poignant write yankee
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAFeb 21, 2012
Hey there Yankee! I really enjoy this particular stanza...
Love can only promise what it can’t keep Always leaving my consciousness churning Then many a nights when there is no sleep A phantom spirit that keeps returning
I can't really say there's an absolute application to it, but there's 'something' really cool about these lines that fascinate me, pique my curiosity and intrigue my mental senses!! Thank you for sharing it with us!!
vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaFeb 22, 2012
I like this poem, although I wouldn't agree with some of its statements. But... we all have various experiences and thoughts about love, thanks for sharing yours. Good luck.
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That leaves me alone to turn old and gray
I m confused, I thought that spare me means keep me away from
And I would read it as
Spare me love that goes away
That leaves me alone to turn old and gray
Am I wrong?
Like a bright glowing ember ever flew
Hit my heart and started a fire burning
So there would be no getting over you
uch as me only a fool needs learning
Thank-you for sharing a heart felt poignant write yankee
Love can only promise what it can’t keep
Always leaving my consciousness churning
Then many a nights when there is no sleep
A phantom spirit that keeps returning
I can't really say there's an absolute application to it, but there's 'something' really cool about these lines that fascinate me, pique my curiosity and intrigue my mental senses!! Thank you for sharing it with us!!