Last Leave to Fall

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Sep 2009 688 Views 10 comments

~Last Leave . . . . to Fall~

orange embered sky fixated upon sweet harvest moon, fluent fall wind echoe's gossip filled leaves, through tha air cross ground they've let their tree go, chatter away in blown piles some stay some blow, yellows red oxide rust green brown silver orange, colage 3d form some are cup shape some get edge worn, wind spun cross lakes an atop river's crick's an stream, rudder'd stem in rigor form tells it's tale as now fall's once again ~

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Posted: Sep 2009

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ohio19Dayton, Ohio USASep 29, 2009

very good i like it

MrAnonymousBoise, Idaho USASep 29, 2009

There's something about this time of year isn't it?

Painted beautifully. Good write

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 29, 2009

:) ty Ohio, it's comments like yours that keep us writin, is what we do eh:)

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USASep 29, 2009

Thank you for letting me see the fall!

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 29, 2009

One a my favourite times a the year, is the start of the rebirth where an when all gets another chance to start all over again an make it better than it ever was. ty mr anonymous:)

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 29, 2009

Ama with pleasure my friend, it's abound here this time a year. Out my back door's a painted scape a all all i've wrote except the water, it's jus down the road:)

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 30, 2009

Beautiful picture that i can see through your words Bentlee again.Thank you