You Left Your Soul

You left your soul
On my chest,
I keep it there.

I hold it close,
It's my guest
I treat with care.

I give it food,
A tear, a dew,
I touch it gently.

It's feeling good,
It waits for you...
Get home safely.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2012
About this poem:
still think of the last rhymes..any suggestions?

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Comments (12)

paloma66
Soft and tender....thumbs up teddybear bouquet
solong
Thanks, Paloma!
But...really?
windyweatherly
teddybear teddybear heart beating heart beating
Yankee4you
Touching you is a feeling that you want to keep and hold on to...very tender.
pilgrimageoflove
solong
Another touching write.
Get home safely is beautiful.
Macduff5
Hi Solong,

How about "it waits for you/ most tenderly". A gorgeous romantic poem. Thanks for sharing. wine
solong
Yankee4you right, I changed I kiss it for I touch it, because soul to be touched not to be kissed
Happygolucky4u
I enjoyed the tenderness of this poem. bouquet
solong
windyweatherly thanks for bears!!!
solong
Thanks, pilgrim!
hawqeye
It kisses my soul
Within my heart,
Oh where must I start?

Someone waiting longingly.Very pretty (the poem).
god bless.
Earlgreytea
Incredible, I loved it!!!
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