*the girl i lost*

my energy my love my obsession for her was too much
i chased her away in all my desperate attempts
i just couldn't backaway and leave things be
amazing me the romantic the listener-what went wrong?

me! i went wrong i forced her to love me now not later
it takes time for two people to really learn about each other
but i would not wait any longer so i forced the issue
it all goes back to being so desperate with my head in the clouds

writing poems was my way of getting her quick attention
how wrong i was! it backfired making her more and more furious
she warned me several times but i ignored her completely
the things i said the things i wrote burned her up inside

to her boiling point she finally exploded now blocked and deleted
my reason for coming to this site everyday has now vanished
the only thing left is a girl filled with hate and disgust
with her finger pointing right at me!i lost her forever

did i learn anything from this?yes a very valuable lesson
how nice it would be if we all had a do-over button
in this life it doesn't work that way you get one chance
to all of you out here looking for love or friendship

start slow and go with the flow don't be so desperate
don't hurt him or her with sharp words that bite!
let time take its course like a smooth flowing river
to the girl in that faraway place you know who you are
i'm really truely sorry for causing you so much agony and pain.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2012
About this poem:
no explanation needed....when she sees this,she'll know i'm sincere.

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Comments (2)

adjhe
Thanks so much for sharing keep it up.lips teddybear bouquet
cherryreggae
Lost love...hurts so much :0( ty for sharing and gibing advicex
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