S.mile at what you've done to me O.vercome by sanity L.ament at your joy I.t is for a foy T.read assure my pristine A.lbeit you tread on my dream I.mprevious to all desire R.each out 'till you grasp the hollow E.mbracing your fuelless fire
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Posted: Mar 2012
About this poem:
IT WAS A 3 PART INSPIRATION - I WROTE IT SHORTLY AFTER READING "He Wishes For The Cloths Of Heaven" by W.B. Yeats - HENCE THE REFERENCE WHICH REMINDED ME OF MY X-GF, (WHICH I WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER FOR ALL OF HER QUALITIES); AND MY LITTLE INGENUOUS SELF FOR AS THE PART 3 OF INSPIRATION (NOT TO SAY MY-ULTIMATELY-NAIVE-SELF) FORTUNATELY EVERYTHING WEN'T REALLY REALLY BAD FOR HER, AFTER A WHILE, WHICH COMFORTED ME (BUT JUST A TINY LITTLE BIT) THIS IS MY WAY TO TELL HER, WHEREVER SHE MIGHT BE NOW,THAT SHE'S A SILLY LITTLE BEE
FragrantBrighton, East Sussex, England UKNov 23, 2012
blah blah
polo440OPTOULOUSE, Occitanie FranceNov 23, 2012
so what :) answering your question: BECAUSE THERE'S A POETRY CORNER HERE read<->write that's it 'bla' all I have so far other people's 'bla' is what like to read - that's what I imagine would a poetry corner on a dating side purposed to be... whatever...:) I had no intend to be baned ;))) bye
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USANov 23, 2012
Can't say that I grasp all your meaning my friend but you an explosive imagination! Keep writing and explore.Chase those thoughts into them tires of hell if need be....
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USANov 23, 2012
PS..Sorry form the typo. It's chase those thoughts into the fires of hell.lol.
polo440OPTOULOUSE, Occitanie FranceNov 23, 2012
Thank U 4 your comment cafetwo2010 I deleted the info on that poem, and couple of others:) I thought were to personal;) I wrote it shortly after reading "He Wishes For The Cloths Of Heaven" by W.B. Yeats (hence the reference) The poem is about someone I will remember well always regardless of 'the times' :), and someone who I wish could someday see a world in lighter colors, because sometimes it's good to embrace the reality as sour as it can be - and 'just let go'. Without a need to hide from someone beside you. SOLITAIRE as one can be it might be a hell of a lot worse not to embrace the solitude, deal with it, just be one with yourself - as hard as it might be...I wish that Ivone:) can someday open herself for someone, more than she did for me ...:))) END.
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answering your question: BECAUSE THERE'S A POETRY CORNER HERE read<->write that's it
'bla' all I have so far other people's 'bla' is what like to read - that's what I imagine would a poetry corner on a dating side purposed to be...
whatever...:)
I had no intend to be baned ;)))
bye
I deleted the info on that poem, and couple of others:) I thought were to personal;)
I wrote it shortly after reading "He Wishes For The Cloths Of Heaven" by W.B. Yeats (hence the reference)
The poem is about someone I will remember well always regardless of 'the times' :), and someone who I wish could someday see a world in lighter colors, because sometimes it's good to embrace the reality as sour as it can be - and 'just let go'. Without a need to hide from someone beside you.
SOLITAIRE as one can be it might be a hell of a lot worse not to embrace the solitude, deal with it, just be one with yourself - as hard as it might be...I wish that Ivone:) can someday open herself for someone, more than she did for me ...:)))
END.